Is this still open?

@TheWindel

If I was gonna 'godmode' and abuse power it wouldn't exactly be a fun and fulfilling story would it?

To put it simply, most of the powers are there for embellishment, shes not exactly there for fighting, or is she the type of person that would actively fight others. She is there to talk, and to find out what is breaking the balance.

@1Charak2

I'm liking your character for the role she serves, though I'm curious how far her awareness extends. Omniscient? Eyes in back of head? Or is she limited to her physical bodies senses?

@TheHangedMan

Are you still interested in joining? If so, were you thinking of a Light or Dark Magical Girl?

@Lonewolf685

Due to her being physically manifested outside of the dimension she was in, she has forfeited the ability to observe where she wishs to observe. So basically shes limited to physical senses like everyone else. (hence why she wants to be in a position where she can find out more about where she is at... e.g a headmistress role)

(Note: Her summons also don't expand her ability to see, she actually has to create a summon with the ability to relay thoughts to her in order to return to her iwth hte information.)

Such Sacrifices have to be made to manifest early after all.

So yes on that note, Illusions kind of work. As well as invisibility spells and things. So playing a trickster actually makes you a solid counter to her. Not that she'll fight you anyway.

@TheWindel Could you define what makes a dark magical girl for me in this setting? I think I get it, but I'd like to have a bit of clarification before committing to a character.

@TheHangedMan

They are magical girls that get corrupted by the influence of negative emotions. For this reason they can draw energy from the nightmares they kill in order to empower themselves.

@KoL Okay, I've decided to make a light magical girl, considering the circumstances. Though I doubt she'll be like the regular haha.

@TheHangedMan

In that case, you're going to be the last character we accept for now. You can join the Discord now if you want.

@KoL

• Appearance:


Yuri at 16 stands at an impressive height of 175cm (5'9"), with an equally impressive physique. She is has an air of "rugged beauty" about her.

Her magical girl costume does not consist of much - during her transformation, she actually wears less clothes than usual, her outfit consisting of a simple sarashi to cover her impressive chest, and a black hakama for pants. Her footwear changes to tall red tengu geta. Her hair also turns from auburn to a dazzling golden hue.

• Name:
Kaneko Yuri

• Title:
Golden Lily

• Age:
16

• Emblem: Yuri's emblem is a mandala tattoo, located on the small of her back:


Normally dull black in color, the tattoo shines golden when Yuri's strength reaches its peak.

• Divine Arm:
Yuri's divine arm manifests itself in the form of a bright red kimono, with a pattern of dancing flames designed into it. While contributing little in the realm of offense, it's defensive capabilities are immense. The fabric is preternaturally tough, capable of acting as a shield for whoever wears it - it is strong enough to weaken the blows and magics of even other magical girls, though of course that is dependent on the strength of the individual magical girl. This defense is not without its limits, however - Yuri's divine arm, differing from her sister magical girls, actually has a set durability. Once a certain amount of punishment is taken, the kimono shatters as if affected by her own ability.

By far it's most powerful ability, however, is it's ability to nullify bindings and status ailments targeting the wearer. Bindings slide off, and attempts to poison or blind the user are rendered ineffective. This allows Yuri to fight to her hearts content. The limits to this ability, however, is that it can only focus on one or the other. Switching between stopping bindings or preventing status ailments takes five minutes of time.

• Magic:
Yuri's magical ability is, simply put, the ability to break things. The longer Yuri exerts her magic on a target, the easier it becomes to break - though only for her. Her magic shows itself through golden glass-like cracks that appear on her target; the more cracks that form, the easier it is to break. Her magic can be applied to even metaphysical constructs or objects that can't be "broken" - like darkness and wind, respectively.

While potent, there are hard and fast limits to her ability. Sentient, living creatures are capable of ignoring her magic completely, with the only exceptions being: Divine or Devil Arms, living creatures that are close to death or no longer wish to live, and Nightmares - though it's debatable whether Nightmares count as "living". Her ability also requires some time to work, with the magnitude of her target coinciding with the time needed to make it properly breakable. For example: a small fireball, something like the size of her head, is something she's capable of "breaking" instantly, while a fireball as big as a car takes significantly longer, to the point where it would be easier to just dodge.

Another drawback is that Yuri's magic is single target only, and her range is limited to what she can touch. While she can switch targets instantly, the speed of her breaking-point does not transfer over, and is limited by sight.

• Background:
Yuri is a girl born in the wrong era with the wrong gender.

What she is, put simply, is a warrior. Uncompromising and only truly alive in the heat of battle. Despite her completely normal upbringing, she was born with an urge to test her might against others. It started with small things - childish wrestling and hair-pulling, started over some nonissue - but gradually evolved into something more refined, if infinitely more lethal.

She would pick fights with others, if none came to her, she would goad them, provoking them into a temper until she got the fight she wanted. This was her daily routine, until one day, an opportunity arrived, promising her greater thrills and ways to test herself.

When the call to magical girlhood came, she answered quickly. Here was an entirely new dimension of battle, one she had never even considered.

Though the Golden Lily fulfills her duty as a magical girl, it is second to her desire for true combat. Among her sisters, however, she is known to be a reckless menace that spontaneously challenges others to duels.

• Inventory:
A journal that she keeps with her at all times. She accurately and precisely records each of her battles in its pages, complete with notes and sketches. This is her 20th such journal.

• Sample Post:


• Theme:

Reworked Pandoria sheet + accompanying sheet

@TheHangedMan

I'll take a proper look at this character later tonight or tomorrow.

@1Charak2

She looks fine to me and KoL. Place her into the Character Tab.

@TheHangedMan

Let's see, where should I begin?

- You need to specify if there's a default mode for your character's D. Arm of if she gets to choose which ability she wants right when she activates it.

- That magic is too powerful based on the way it's written. That along with the power of her weapon makes it so that she can be the uncontested winner of any battle she ever comes across since the things that she can destroy instantly are what would be the normal attacks of pretty much every other magical girl in the story. As a suggestion, make it so that she can't do anything to magic and specially other characters' weapons.

- Also, regarding her backstory and sample post. What exactly makes her a light magical girl? From what I can see she's motivated only by violence and the will to fight others regardless of context. That's a behavior that would have led her down the path of corruption almost instantly. Unless you rewrite her in a more appropriate way, she'll have to be branded as a dark magical girl.

That's what I have seen for the moment. I'll take a better look once you have addressed these points.

@TheHangedMan

Still with us? Or did you edit your CS?

New Character ! Second, actually.

Meet Rania. She will not be interacting directly with the Detention Club, though, as she has already graduated. Her partner still needs to be revealed, though.

P.S: I've had the 'Go' for it. :)

There, Rania's partner. As well as my second character.

Wew. Why ya gotta make a character like that a dark girl? Maiko coulda had so much fun...

@ERode

Admittedly, this was prototype Touka. So I'm releasing my "could have beens" in this way.

"could have be-a-ns"

I'm hungry now. I can't read when hungry