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Noted. I will do my best in this coming days.
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@Thundere Hello! Welcome! I'm just going to let you know it's 'quality over quantity', rather than 'first come, first serve'.
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I've been quiet for a couple days, so I'm just stopping by to status update on my CS. At the moment I am trying to hash out the backstory concept and figure out the semblance for this character.
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@Thundere Thanks for the update. If you like, you can send a group PM to the GM's so you don't have to develop your ideas in a vacuum.
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May I still join this RP?
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I believe with tobiax’s newest character, there’s still a slot untouched?
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I believe with tobiax’s newest character, there’s still a slot untouched?


Actually, I'm still working on my second character and I believe Nyaha wanted to make a second as well. We can make room if your apps have the quality to them to warrant it, but you and Claw will have to get a move on if you want a chance for those spots.
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@Nyahahameha Send us humble GM's the DM's with the juice. I love quiet kitty so far.
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Get us your ideas, at least in part, by PM. We'll consider them.
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I mean the public CS is finished so I might as well just...

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@Thundere So... there are a few issues. One- but this is minor since it'll be resolved once you PM us, is I have no idea how the Semblance works. Secondly- and this is more important- Atlas would never allow a Dust thief to be extradited. Like, ever. You do remember who runs the country, right? Plus, I don't think Vacuo would want a known, violent Dust thief at Shade- being that Shade is the only form of authority they have. It sort of goes against the mutual-cooperation-to-avoid-death culture that Vacuo seems to have.
These are just my opinions, but I do think the weapon is neat. Though his strengths could use with some more elaboration, whether in his personality, backstory, or on their own.
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@Thundere While I'm not a GM in any capacity and I agree with what Tobiax said, he's still a hot piece of ass that I want on a team with Saffron.
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Alrighty. Back from vacay. Let’s break this down piece by piece. Not gonna use any PM info because that’s playing dirty.

One- but this is minor since it'll be resolved once you PM us, is I have no idea how the Semblance works

This is fair. Can’t send the PM rn since busy but the TLDR is just selectively activated attraction/repulsion centered around stuff with his aura injected in it. It’s not super elaborate.

Secondly- and this is more important- Atlas would never allow a Dust thief to be extradited. Like, ever. You do remember who runs the country, right?

Pre-Fall Ironwood isn’t the paranoid militant Ironwood, you know. He’s reasonable before the world goes to shit. Yang assaulted Mercury, and he believed the illusion claim. Even afterwards, Weiss attacks a civilian because she was slighted, and he takes her side. He’s shown to be understanding of other people. A stressed out minor sticking to his guns is not hard to pick up on, and even someone like him ought to understand lack of cooperation etc in this case.

Regardless, I’m aware I can solve this problem by changing one name, so I’m only going to answer the question you posed and not talk about it further.

Plus, I don't think Vacuo would want a known, violent Dust thief at Shade- being that Shade is the only form of authority they have. It sort of goes against the mutual-cooperation-to-avoid-death culture that Vacuo seems to have.

There is no contradiction with Vacuo or Shade’s spirit. Vacuo doesn’t care who you are. That’s the point of Vacuo. It’s in the maxim: “If you can survive here, you can be here.” There is no ambiguity there. It’s even in your OP. It’s also pretty clearly stated most Vacuans don’t care about the law, and being a criminal doesn’t preclude working together to avoid death in the first place. Logically, the icon of the area should bear some similarities to the area itself.

But for the sake of it, let’s say Shade operates on a similar order as other academies and otherwise isn’t influenced by the spirit of the nation. Beacon Academy has allowed: two murder and pillage bandits who only became huntsmen to know how to beat huntsmen, a fresh White Fang defect, and a cheater that got in despite heavy implications Ozpin was aware. This does not include the antagonists because I can’t imagine they entered through normal channels.

Shade is explicitly less rigid than Beacon. Therefore...

Though his strengths could use with some more elaboration, whether in his personality, backstory, or on their own.

You’re talking about his Level 10 Rogue class skills, I imagine. Which, to be fair, I skimped out on that yeah. But everything else is pretty explicit about how and why, or there’s enough elsewhere to figure out how and why.

he's still a hot piece of ass


Yes, I do believe that’s why I chose that picture.
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Despite Ironwood not having cracked yet, there's still the three other seats of the council. In Atlas. After he was just caught stealing from the Schnee Dust Company. In Atlas. People have been jailed-for-life for less in Atlas, or at least that's the impression it gives off. But it's basically the same situation as Roman Torchwick. Who was put in the world's smallest cell on a sky-boat.
Having previously been a criminal isn't the issue. It's how he got to Shade. So, if you do a PM of what went down, and divorce the end of his criminal career with his joining of Shade, at least chronologically, and it'll probably work better.
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Added a bit more to the IC.
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Let's see what you got.
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