@PaulHaynek
Ey, don't worry about it. Not everyone needs some super amazing backstory. Interesting. Former apostle who basically deserted. Well, bet they're not too happy about that. I see nothing wrong here, though if you could tell me how long he's been in dawn that'd be lovely.
@Click This
As discussed, she looks good. No glaring issues on my end that I see that need to be addressed. I'll be interested to see how the two raam potentially interact. Regardless, i'm assuming she's only arrived in dawn shortly after the blizzard ended? Seems a lot of people are doing that, huhu. Not that its a problem.
@A Lowly Wretch
Would have been nice if you had asked me about some of the stuff in the bio, but overall its not too bad. Being a 'simple hunter' is a high honor among the Valtem. Means your probably capable of killing most hostile sea life by yourself or with a small group. Basically she'd have been a small bit of a celebrity and probably wouldn't have been talked down to no matter what she looked like.
Not all Valtem are some siren/mermaid-esque creature, either. While I used Zora as an example for how they generally should look on average, special cases are there and often seen as blessed in some manner by Lavetha. Not that it changes much, but that means she's being sort of disingenuous with her motivations and 'being made fun of' since that wouldn't have been a thing. Her frightening visage might have very well been considered a blessing, especially if it makes others absolutely terrified of her in a very predatory way.
As long as your cool with the above, then, I see no reason to make an changes.
@VitaVitaAR
Excellent profile as always. I've got nothing to say or no major issues here, friendo. I'll be going with you were tasked by the King himself to do this and I'll send ya the details of how that'd go once everything gets going...and since I'm playing Navi the fairy, I'll get up a small CS for her soon once that happens as well.
Ey, don't worry about it. Not everyone needs some super amazing backstory. Interesting. Former apostle who basically deserted. Well, bet they're not too happy about that. I see nothing wrong here, though if you could tell me how long he's been in dawn that'd be lovely.
@Click This
As discussed, she looks good. No glaring issues on my end that I see that need to be addressed. I'll be interested to see how the two raam potentially interact. Regardless, i'm assuming she's only arrived in dawn shortly after the blizzard ended? Seems a lot of people are doing that, huhu. Not that its a problem.
@A Lowly Wretch
Would have been nice if you had asked me about some of the stuff in the bio, but overall its not too bad. Being a 'simple hunter' is a high honor among the Valtem. Means your probably capable of killing most hostile sea life by yourself or with a small group. Basically she'd have been a small bit of a celebrity and probably wouldn't have been talked down to no matter what she looked like.
Not all Valtem are some siren/mermaid-esque creature, either. While I used Zora as an example for how they generally should look on average, special cases are there and often seen as blessed in some manner by Lavetha. Not that it changes much, but that means she's being sort of disingenuous with her motivations and 'being made fun of' since that wouldn't have been a thing. Her frightening visage might have very well been considered a blessing, especially if it makes others absolutely terrified of her in a very predatory way.
As long as your cool with the above, then, I see no reason to make an changes.
@VitaVitaAR
Excellent profile as always. I've got nothing to say or no major issues here, friendo. I'll be going with you were tasked by the King himself to do this and I'll send ya the details of how that'd go once everything gets going...and since I'm playing Navi the fairy, I'll get up a small CS for her soon once that happens as well.