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Hidden 1 yr ago 1 yr ago Post by Little Bird
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Abandoned my earlier planned character in favor of the character below because the original idea didn't feel suitable for the world this takes place in (waiting for a more opportune moment for that one). Hopefully i didn't go too overboard with power. Hoping the more melee oriented aspect of her abilities balances things.

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@deadpixel101 I would really like to have encountered your guy before. It builds the dread really well - especially since this power would be borderline useless against your army of constructs. So it fits really well into the 'run whenever possible' mantra.

We could write like a collab flashback for it.
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@Blizz

Sounds good lol. I like the idea of him being a white whale for my guy. Someone he just couldn't catch no matter how many times their paths crossed.

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Awesome I'd love that! I can see a fight between our characters getting pretty zany lol
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@deadpixel101 I'll hit you up directly.
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If this is still open/running I'd love to join! Thinking of making a character with the ability to fly (and maybe something to pair with flight)?
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@Troubleshoot looking good! I would like to see a little more on the drawbacks of Kilo's powers to help flesh him out a bit more, like maybe his powers have a time limit before his gravity ability starts to wear off! Otherwise, he's accepted!
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@cosmiccowgirl We're always looking for new members! I look forward to your application!
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@Blizz Accepted! I love this tank!
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@Wayward Interesting! I like the direction you're going with them! I would like for you to tell me more about the drawbacks of their powers just to make sure she's not too OP, even Alpha class has some weaknesses. Like I think it would be better if she wasn't bullet proof for example, ultimately her drawbacks are up to you. Otherwise they're approved!
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@Wayward Interesting! I like the direction you're going with them! I would like for you to tell me more about the drawbacks of their powers just to make sure she's not too OP, even Alpha class has some weaknesses. Like I think it would be better if she wasn't bullet proof for example, ultimately her drawbacks are up to you. Otherwise they're approved!


To keep with the general scheme of things with her, would it be acceptable to say she fight through/resist light firearms from a distance, but can be hindered by heavy fire and injured by armor piercing rounds?
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@Wayward That'll be an improvement! I just want to make sure no one character is too OP and everyone has their drawbacks when it comes to their powers. Something has to be able to hurt her. Like maybe she's not resistant to electric attacks, or she can't swim because her bones and muscles are too dense so she automatically sinks, etc.
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@Blizz@Troubleshoot Make sure to put your accepted applications in the Character Page! Thanks!

Also! *insert fanfare* We officially have enough people to get this story started! I will start writing up a post to set the stage and get things moving while the last couple people finish up their applications!
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@Wayward That'll be an improvement! I just want to make sure no one character is too OP and everyone has their drawbacks when it comes to their powers. Something has to be able to hurt her. Like maybe she's not resistant to electric attacks, or she can't swim because her bones and muscles are too dense so she automatically sinks, etc.


I'll work out the issues over the coming days.
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Alright! The first post has been made! Let's get this party started!
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Okay, here's my character application! Please let me know if she seems too overpowered or anything, I just had two ideas I really wanted to use power-wise and thought I'd combine them. I tried to make sure they were well-balanced and not over the top lol, but I'm open to critique! xD

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@deadpixel101Are you okay with Lavina being an ex-student of the Hound?
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@Ace of flames01 Let me know if I need to change anything.
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@WhiteAngel25

That would be super cool!

I don't see him as much of a teaching figure but that just makes an ex-student dynamic even more interesting!
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@deadpixel101 That’s what I was thinking. I figured that he would probably see Lavina more as a pet project than something significant.
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@cosmiccowgirl Heya thanks for your application! There will definitely need to be some changes before she can be accepted. Gifted people only have one power per individual so if you'd like to and feel like you can handle a second character, then you are more than welcome to make a second character to use the second power! There will have to be some minor changes made depending on what power you go with. As for the enhancements, those feel too close to having a third power so I would recommend scratching them out. Also the gifts that a character receives is based on the genetics of her parents and I'm not going to count telepathy and telekinesis as the same power and I don't consider making blades of plasma to be telekinetic. Lastly, could you please explain more as to how your character got to where the others are going to be? Sorry for the inconvenience, I know these are a lot of changes but thank you for your understanding in advance!
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