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Hidden 1 yr ago Post by Ace of flames01
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@WhiteAngel25 I think I saw a minor grammar/ sentence issue in the 3rd last paragraph but otherwise it's looking good! I'm going to give others the chance to make their posts before I respond! Thanks so much! I'm so excited to be starting this thing!
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@cosmiccowgirl Heya thanks for your application! There will definitely need to be some changes before she can be accepted. Gifted people only have one power per individual so if you'd like to and feel like you can handle a second character, then you are more than welcome to make a second character to use the second power! There will have to be some minor changes made depending on what power you go with. As for the enhancements, those feel too close to having a third power so I would recommend scratching them out. Also the gifts that a character receives is based on the genetics of her parents and I'm not going to count telepathy and telekinesis as the same power and I don't consider making blades of plasma to be telekinetic. Lastly, could you please explain more as to how your character got to where the others are going to be? Sorry for the inconvenience, I know these are a lot of changes but thank you for your understanding in advance!


No worries, thanks for the feedback! And I apologize, I must've missed and/or forgotten that they should have just one power lol xD I'll definitely go over my sheet and figure out if I'd rather downsize Alaine or bring in a second character haha, hopefully I can get that done later tonight.

I did have a question about the starting point! Again, I might've missed and/or forgotten it if the answer to this was in the initial interest check, so I apologize if that's the case... As far as the starting point goes, after reading your starter post, are all our characters going to be meeting in the concentration camp (either already there or coming in with the newbies?), or is it possible for characters to be outside the camp (in the Rebel Army or otherwise)?

Thanks again for the feedback! I'll get on it as soon as possible <3
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@cosmiccowgirl Ideally I would think most people would want to be near the camp at the very least. You don't have to be inside the camp if you're not wanting her to start out as a prisoner, but you'll want her to be within 10 miles or so of the camp to get more character interaction.
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@WhiteAngel25

That's a fair assumption lmaoo

He'd probably genuinely want to instruct her since he really does believe in his cause, he's just bad with people.

If she felt like she was under a petri dish with him, that wouldn't be an unfair response lol
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I've amended my character. Durabilitywise -> Blunt force or broad surface pressure = she's good. Piercing damage = she's not so good.
Also added the part where swimming is practically impossible, though I stipulated that she could if she was equipped with gear to assist in flotation.
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@Waywardthank you for the changes! Accepted!
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Hey there, still open for a new member? Thinking of a teleporter right hand to the Hound. A lil off her rocker. I've got a few ideas for limitations, but nothing that stood out as a weakness, so im still thinking about that part
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@Lunatik79 we're always open to having more members! I like your idea! I look forward to seeing your ideas!
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Hey there, still open for a new member? Thinking of a teleporter right hand to the Hound. A lil off her rocker. I've got a few ideas for limitations, but nothing that stood out as a weakness, so im still thinking about that part


BIG EXCITEMENT

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Sorry, I'm withdrawing from this game.
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@Expendable no worries! thanks for the update!
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@Ace of flames01 let me know if there are any changes you need me to make. I tried not to make the teleporting to OP. I gave her a short term weakness with heat exhaustion to tap her out, long term weakness with cancer, and a little chaotic weakness with the teleporting into objects. Let me know what you think about all of it.
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@Lunatik79 thank you for your application! I will give it a look see and get back to ASAP!
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@Lunatik79I like it! Accepted!
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I’ve been frazzled lately but I’m back.

Will try to catch up soon
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@Blizz sounds good! life happens so no worries!
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Seeing as I'm playing the big bad I sort of wanted to wait until more people had posted before I started in the IC, but if we wanted to keep things moving I can start working on something soon.
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@deadpixel101 life stuff seems to be happening but it's all good! if you'd like to post in IC that could be good. otherwise didn't you say you were interested in making a second character? You can have multiple characters as long as you feel up to it!
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@Ace of flames01
Hi, I'm potentially interested in this but I have a few questions about my character concept and the worldbuilding! I apologize if I ramble, so I've put the questions into hiders:



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