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Praise the Sun. Dark Souls (1) is hands-down my favorite video game. Dark 2, not so much. Umbassa.

Okay, back on topic.
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Nevis said
Praise the Sun. Dark Souls (1) is hands-down my favorite video game. Dark 2, not so much.


I haven't played it yet, so I can't make any judgments.

Nevis said Umbassa.


Demon souls. It's my favorite. You just can't beat Yurt the Silent Chief.


Nevis said Okay, back on topic.


Aww...do we have to? :p
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We can continue in pms if you like. Yes, though, we are getting back on topic (in this thread).
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A very interesting read Nevis. Sorry it took me so long to finish, but hey that's life haha. I don't see any issues or the like and think it is...intriguing. I wonder which realm he was a lord to. He can't have been the first lord of the West, but it'd be quite interesting if the Bringer used to be one.
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This character will debut in my next IC post with Tristan, she will be a major character to his development so I figured I would see if she could be approved first before my next post gets here.

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http://s4.postimg.org/ta1hxsokd/version_01_by_Alex_Pascenko_on_deviant_ART.jpg

Use this link instead of the one you're using for her pic, Vinsanity, the one you're using doesn't show up.

Also, she's a warden? From which of the realms. I'd suggest she be from the West, personally, as if that is the case it'd be much more likely that she creates vampires (that seems to primarily originate from demons of the Western realm since Nightwalkers can also create vampires). I'll read over the CS more completely later and tell ya what I think.
Good job for deciding to step out on the limb and be one of the first newcomers to make a warden class demon :D

Was hoping I'd see some more of those :P
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I fixed the pic link I believe and am glad stepping out on a limb is welcomed. She can be from the Western realm although I'll admit I don't know too much about any of the realms. I looked for it on the site and could not find anything.
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Seeing all these NPCs almost makes we want to flesh out Darius and Juan, though the latter's history to a point will likely not be added as it would ruin a few surprises. (Save for the GMs and anyone needed to be involved)
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Glitchy: I approve your changes to your 2 characters. Now Slade's approval must be given.

Vinsanity: I approve of your Scarlet Queen NPC. Now Slade's approval must be given.
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Vinsanity: I'm compiling a list of things we still need to write up, my apologies for the lack of information.
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The wait continues....
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I'm working on compiling all my info on the Western realm actually, it's a WIP atm ^^;
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Glitchy said
The wait continues....


At least you're half way there. :p
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It's all good, just glad I didn't miss anything. What makes the realms so different with the current knowledge now?
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Fallenreaper said
At least you're half way there. :p


I guess lol. I might have to change some of the interactions with Emmet and Brysen. I'm sure one of these days Graham is going to bust down Darius's door. And Emmet is going to be there ready to duke it out.
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Glitchy said
I guess lol. I might have to change some of the interactions with Emmet and Brysen. I'm sure one of these days Graham is going to bust down Darius's door. And Emmet is going to be there ready to duke it out.


Keep in mind, too much change and it might not work. Mainly if Brysen's going to expect Emmet to volunteer without a little shove from Darius, namely cause Emmet rather not get too tangled up in affairs that conflict with his and risk his sister's life.

On another note, the only reason Emmet and him would duke it out is because Darius tends to keep Olivia close. She actually lives in the same house as Darius's adopted daughter, both in private and the public eye. Mainly cause it's easier to control/manipulate someone who believes you want the best for them and not alternative motives...I won't say everything he pretends is untrue.
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Glitchy said
The wait continues....


Not for long.

I will not accept these characters as is. Mainly because of this reason right here

Glitchy said An esper is a rare human that manipulates essences


Stop. Stop right there. A human cannot manipulate essence. They can never manipulate essence because they are Human. End of discussion. That is what Demons do. It seems you want the abilities of demons without any of the weaknesses that come with it. Sorry, but it won't fly. Here is what Human's can do in regards to magic as taken straight from the first post of this here OOC

Humans, have a strong essence within themselves like angels, but instead, humans use it to mix with the essence of the outside world, making a diverse of magic very possible for humans. Think of it like a form of alchemy or chemistry: mixing one's own essence with some other kind of essence to basically form a magical cocktail of sorts.


The only essence an human can use freely is their own. Exceptions are when they are tainted with Demonic influence, which comes with its own weaknesses and such.

With that being said. It seems both of your characters electromagnetic abilities are based a combination of manipulating your own essence and outside essence. I've been talking with Mika about this and he says that is not the case here and he brought up a very good argument that perhaps the characters are just using their own essence to carry out these things. But then I read stuff like this:

glitchy said the core of an espers ability to manipulate essences resides completely in their brain


And sirens start going off in my head because once again. Outside essence manipulation is off limits to Humans (unless for reasons specified above).

To be completely honest. The drawbacks behind using these abilities is fine. It's just the explanation behind why you are able to utilize these powers is on such shaky ground that I can't accept it. You need to be more clear in how the character's essence alone can do these things. The fact that Mikael had to explain things to me as well in order to slightly understand how these powers worked shows that things need to be edited and re-written. Sorry, I'm not a science person. And i'm not afraid to say that a lot of the science went way over my head.

glitchy said If this means people are gonna fight my characters cause their vigilantes then....hehehe. *Cracks Knuckles*


Please do not tempt GMs. That is what the newly installed player meat grinder next to the pie shop is for. To be honest I could give a very large reason why vigilante crime fighting is actually terrible to the infrastructure of Kenan and its safety. But I won't. Mainly because you can technically do it and I won't limit players on what they want to do as long is its possible. And because both your characters activities are limited to small time things. But keep in mind these Casino owners are the "official" rulers of Kenan, there are no politicians as a front or something. It is made very clear who is in charge and the way things are run. So if someone tries to actively go against that. They'll probably die.

Now with all that said. I'm going to go eat Cocoa Pebbles with whole milk like a baller.
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I agree with Slade. Wording is important.

Glitchy, this is why I suggested to you to change the first line of your Esper perk.
It was this, I believe? "An esper is a rare human that manipulates essences using their mind."
And I said change it to this? "An esper is a rare human that manipulates their own essence using their mind instead of spells, writings, or chants."
Instead, you wrote this: "An esper is a rare human that manipulates essences using their mind instead of spells, writings, and incantations."

And now here we are, still discussing things that I wish would have been resolved long ago. But it's alright. I am hoping that you understand why we are stressing the point of wording here.

There's a fine line to how each race approaches the use of essence and its main application: magic. Let me try to explain what I mean.



  • Humans... have to sacrifice oil, fuel, etc. in order to make engines run and achieve certain desired results.

  • Demons... do not have to make such sacrifices; their engines are just going to run. Period.

  • Angels... are the damn engines.


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Here we go again...Please wait as I process the relevant information....
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