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I ment to post today, but I found out my dad will be going into surgery, not sure of the date, so...yeah, RPing is on a back burner.
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@JoPo

It's fine. Take your time and look after yourself. Sometimes we all need a little pampering.

@Crimson Raven

I hope everything is alright. Do what you need to do buddy, we can wait.
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Yeah, you do you. Send out the Cricket Signal whenever, I'll come a'running.

Note to Self: Get Cricket Signal
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I think my CS is finally done. It's on page 12.
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I think my CS is finally done. It's on page 12.


Repost it here
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Name: Zada

Age: 16

Sex: Male

Race: Sheika

Handiness: Ambidextrous

Appearance: Zada stands about six and a quarter feet with white, layered hair that goes down to his mid-back and red eyes. He has an athletic build and long, slender limbs, allowing for more versatile use of his weapons. He wears a purple tunic with black long sleeves under, the Shieka eye on a wide white scarf over his chest. Around his waist, over the tunic, as well as covering his forearms and shins, are old, white bandages that are starting to get miscolored. Over his legs, he wears a pair of grey, baggy pants. His feet are protected by a pair of brown leather boots with steel plates over the toes, the top of the foot and around the back of the heel.

Inheritance: The Lens of Truth was passed down through the generations from his ancestor, Impa.

Personality: He is mostly cool and level-headed but can go off the handle, though those times are few and far between. He tends to be quiet, preferring to let others speak and then do his own thing. Once he does start talking, it is usually about how cruel the world is. Because of this, he can come off as a pessimist, though he tries to look to the brighter side of things.

Recent history: Despite the discrimination from most of the guards, Zada joined quite easily and quickly rose to the spot of the princess's personal guard.

Personal Goal: Equallity

Three strengths (Not just combat)
1. Understanding
2. Physical abilities
3. Caring heart

Three weaknesses (Not just combat)
1. Temper
2. Lack of communication
3. Uncontrollable rage

Greatest Love: Milk and apples

Hates the most: Discrimination

Misc: He is an excellent cook and, by extension, hunter, gatherer And fisherman.

Theme music: Fall Out Boy - Centuries
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@Crimson RavenYou're lucky I refresh so much XD
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Few things. First, and biggest problem, him being the princess's personal guard won't work for both story reasons and logical reasons. Story-wise, there is not princess and the current king is not of the hyrule line. Logically, the personal guard of royalty would not join up with a group of rouges and go wandering all over the country.

Next, the three weaknessess. Three is a repeat of one, and I would like you to explain number two a little better.

Being able to cook, hunt, gather and fish, and be 'excellent' at all of them is a bit...much. Pick one of those things.

Next, we have a sheikah and there are some special circumstances around them. I beveive some of the details are in a character sheet. Plus, equality and discrimination contradict the sheikah, in general. They are secrative and don't care much what people think about them. With that, no sheikai would not join the
guard because they are their own sect, with a similar, but bigger job then the soldiers.

Sorry, but there is way too much that doesn't work with your character. I suggest re-thinking him completely. (Although, you don't have to)
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@Crimson RavenYou're lucky I refresh so much XD


How so?

Edit: Nevermind, I think I know.
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Waiting for Ryuzaki to reply, then I'll be getting to posting again.
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Waiting for Ryuzaki to reply, then I'll be getting to posting again.


Please, put a mention when you say my name or I may never see it XD life prevents me from scrolling through pages of RP to see what has happened until the weekend comes. Senior year of High School is too much right now. Anywho, I will be posting tonight and replying to both you and @cuccoruler

@KazeXDZ

Few things. First, and biggest problem, him being the princess's personal guard won't work for both story reasons and logical reasons. Story-wise, there is not princess and the current king is not of the hyrule line. Logically, the personal guard of royalty would not join up with a group of rouges and go wandering all over the country.

Next, the three weaknessess. Three is a repeat of one, and I would like you to explain number two a little better.

Being able to cook, hunt, gather and fish, and be 'excellent' at all of them is a bit...much. Pick one of those things.

Next, we have a sheikah and there are some special circumstances around them. I beveive some of the details are in a character sheet. Plus, equality and discrimination contradict the sheikah, in general. They are secrative and don't care much what people think about them. With that, no sheikai would not join the guard because they are their own sect, with a similar, but bigger job then the soldiers.

Sorry, but there is way too much that doesn't work with your character. I suggest re-thinking him completely. (Although, you don't have to)

Princess thing is too major to forgive.

I can see him being an excellent cook and just have minor hunting gathering and fishing but (edit) Excellency in(/edit) all of them is WAYYY too much.

Exactly the sheikah are their own BRANCH of the hylian military and would never join the guard. They only protect the princess and no one else, as they were assigned that job by the goddess Hylia before the first Zelda was born.

Agreed.
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Sure thing! I'll make sure to tag you in posts about from now on. It's not something I usually think about.

I hope you don't think I was trying to bug you into replying. I was just making sure people knew I was still here.
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Sure thing! I'll make sure to tag you in posts about from now on. It's not something I usually think about.

I hope you don't think I was trying to bug you into replying. I was just making sure people knew I was still here.


No, I know you weren't. Usually people bug me through PMs. I take a post in the OOC as a reminder and am glad I saw it or I may have assumed nothing had happened in RP with my character.
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I may need to drop out of this. There's just too many players and characters to keep track of, I can't keep up. Terribly sorry if this inconveniences anyone.
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I may need to drop out of this. There's just too many players and characters to keep track of, I can't keep up. Terribly sorry if this inconveniences anyone.


NOOO! DON'T GOOOO!!!

*Ahem*

Thats alright, if you want to come back there will be a spot for ya'
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Working on a post.
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Posted! Sorry for the double post.
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@Ryuzaki
Double posting is a touch more forgivable in the OOC, I find. But just to be safe, I put this one up in case you tried to triple post. That's when I demand pistols at ten paces.

Principle of the thing.
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Hope you don't mind but I'm gonna move this along a bit with a slight bit of godmodding, nothing major other than them joining the group
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Psh, you call that godmodding? It was just a time skip and I have no problems with it.
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