Hm, aight. Let's see...
@Rin@VitaVitaAR: No issue for you two, so all clear.
@Grey Star: Super regeneration and infinite bodies is... Worrisome. Also the kit itself feels kinda... I dunno, overloaded? Too much stuff in a single package means an overwhelming... Well, basically a force of nature at that point. Also, drawing parallels to other things that are in the series assumes we know the scale of what your referencing, and not everyone does, so.
But yeah, core problem: legitimately no way to keep the character down without some really... Shady stuff, nor do I have a clear sense of scale as to how big or how fast your character can make/do stuff. So until I get a clearer picture, non.
@Dezuel: Okay, let's... Ignore all the various issues with spelling and grammar in the forms for the moment and look at the actual characters, I guess.
First character... Not many issues other than the writing ones. Big one is clarity on "impressive physical toughness, strength and most importantly speed". I need scale. Also technically you don't need to list literally every piece of clothing on them; just the important stuff like weapons and stuff works.
Second... People did research for me.
I found that the character can tank some seriously stupid bs with nary a scratch.
So noperino.
Third... No issue. All clear on that one.
@Crimson Raven: Must be pre-existing. No player avatar-type characters.
Anyways, forms, forms... Right, here we go.
And before anyone flips, let me point out that I've gone into detail on the form on limitations I am imposing on the character (and myself) to make this work. Went out of my way to try and make the rules for her stuff in the RP as clear as possible. Read it yourself if you don't believe me :I
@Rin@VitaVitaAR: No issue for you two, so all clear.
@Grey Star: Super regeneration and infinite bodies is... Worrisome. Also the kit itself feels kinda... I dunno, overloaded? Too much stuff in a single package means an overwhelming... Well, basically a force of nature at that point. Also, drawing parallels to other things that are in the series assumes we know the scale of what your referencing, and not everyone does, so.
But yeah, core problem: legitimately no way to keep the character down without some really... Shady stuff, nor do I have a clear sense of scale as to how big or how fast your character can make/do stuff. So until I get a clearer picture, non.
@Dezuel: Okay, let's... Ignore all the various issues with spelling and grammar in the forms for the moment and look at the actual characters, I guess.
First character... Not many issues other than the writing ones. Big one is clarity on "impressive physical toughness, strength and most importantly speed". I need scale. Also technically you don't need to list literally every piece of clothing on them; just the important stuff like weapons and stuff works.
Second... People did research for me.
I found that the character can tank some seriously stupid bs with nary a scratch.
So noperino.
Third... No issue. All clear on that one.
@Crimson Raven: Must be pre-existing. No player avatar-type characters.
Anyways, forms, forms... Right, here we go.
And before anyone flips, let me point out that I've gone into detail on the form on limitations I am imposing on the character (and myself) to make this work. Went out of my way to try and make the rules for her stuff in the RP as clear as possible. Read it yourself if you don't believe me :I