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<Snipped quote by Roman>
I'm all for communal stuff. If you want to share I would love to see a different perspective.


I see how it is. You want Roman's review publicly and mine privately.
Clearly, my words will be so special he wants to keep them all for himself.
The last of my houseguests leave tonight, so a new post will be sometime in the next couple of days. And reviews will also start up again sometime this week. Going to start with a couple of you who asked for private ones.

If anyone wants to get in contact with me you'll be better off doing so here as opposed to the Discord server. I don't intend to be active in there anymore unless someone @s me.

Manhattan, New York City | Present Day

Chapter One | Part Five

Adrenaline surged through his body. The rhythmic thumping in his chest synchronized with the furious pumping of his legs. He rounded what felt like the tenth corner, sneakers skidding across the loose dirt and pebbles. Hastily navigating the labyrinthian back alleys with the telltale sounds of a struggle guiding his path, Eli grit his teeth as another scream from Starfire rang out.

Damn it, he cursed. Not fast enough.

Rounding the final corner, Elijah skidded to a stop, nearly toppling over at the abrupt reversal of momentum. He narrowly avoided colliding with a man sailing through the air, the body slamming hard against a brick wall. Following the trajectory of the man, Eli spotted Koriand'r floating several feet above the ground.

She appeared in rough shape. Her shirt was torn, portions completely missing, and almost looked to be melted at the edges. Her golden skin was blotched red in some spots, and her forearms looked nearly blistered. Fists balled tightly and green eyes flaring with energy, the alien girl loomed over the man she had just thrown.

"That is enough. You are defeated. I do not wish to hurt you any further."

Eli allowed himself a mental sigh of relief as he realized Koriand'r had the situation handled, albeit a little worse for wear in the process. He looked towards the man who was nursing a small gash across the forehead. Looking to be in his 30's, the man wore dark, heavy clothing with sleeves rolled up to reveal comprehensive inkwork. The word 'melter' was featured prominently in gaudy text along one arm. And, Eli couldn't be sure, but as the man slowly shuffled to his feet there appeared to be track marks noticeable around the inside of an elbow.

"Shit, man!" A new voice swore loudly.

The sudden cursing reminded Elijah that he had been warned of multiple men participating in an attack on a kid. Glancing to his left, Eli spotted the other perpetrator cowering against a wall. More handsome and with softer features than his partner, this one looked terrified as his eyes flicked between the two combatants.

Eli's gaze then drifted over further to notice the prone form of a young, green-skinned boy. He barely had enough time to register this unusual appearance before he heard Koriand'r shouting in his direction. Whipping his head back around, the teen was confronted by the tattooed man's raised arm. Elijah wasn't aware of the danger until the outstretched hand glowed with crimson. Eyes widening, he reacted too slowly as the energy radiated forth.

His vision was filled with fiery red. Koriand'r quickly positioned herself before him, throwing her arms in a cross to shield him from the blast. Eli could feel no heat from the energy, but he watched as his friend's skin bubbled and began to peel away slightly. She let out an angry yell and launched her body forward, forcing her way through the attack to once more confront the powered individual.

Eli stumbled back, catching himself before he fell. Holy fucking shit!

He stared in amazement as the two fought before him. Koriand'r doing her best to subdue the man without serious harm while her foe relentlessly unleashed wave after wave of that unknown energy.

This is... Eli's thoughts both raced and struggled to form coherently. I knew they existed. I've seen what Starfire could do. But... Jesus shit Christ.

Even despite his panic, Eli wanted to join the fight. His muscles tensed as he watched, hoping to find an opening to help Koriand'r take the man down. But as he witnessed another crimson beam streak past Koriand'r, he knew that this conflict was far above his weight class. Eli dug his fingers hard into each palm out of frustration.

Taking a second to focus himself, Eli forced his gaze away from the superpowered struggle. The boy was the real priority, he knew. When he looked back towards the kid, Elijah saw the handsome man bending down to drag the body away.

Eli charged forward, reacting on pure instinct, and closed the distance in a few strides. Dropping his right shoulder down, he bodychecked the would-be-abductor causing both to topple over one another. The two scrambled back off the ground quickly, squaring off. Despite the fear etched across his attractive face, the man still managed to snarl at Eli as he produced a switchblade from a pocket.

Elijah moved into a defensive position. "You don't wanna do this, man."

Switching his hold on the knife to an underhanded grip, the man nervously took a step forward. "I need the kid. I can't leave here without him."

"That's not happening."

Rushing forward, the handsome man held his arm up high intending to bring it down onto Elijah's chest. The blade never found its mark, however, as Eli immediately stepped forward to face the attack head-on. Throwing his left hand up to deflect the blow and pushing his wrist against his attacker's, Eli simultaneously let loose with a well-practiced punch to the man's neck.

Spittle flew as the man coughed and doubled over. Driving forward with his counterattack, Eli quickly gained control of the wrist, locking it into place. Two knee strikes to the gut and groin immediately followed, and while the man clutched at his stomach Eli took the opportunity to rake the knife out of his grasp. Tossing the blade to the side, Eli shoved the man to gain distance.

"Are we through here?" Eli asked despite it being clear the man was out of commission for the moment.

His body felt on fire as the adrenaline raced through his system. Elijah had sparred with training partners more times than he could count over the last six years, but he had never been in a real fight until now, let alone one with stakes so high.

"Hey!" A voice quietly called out. "Quick, while the guy's down, grab the kid."

For the second time that day, Eli startled and nearly fell backward. To his right, a spectral figure rose from within the ground. Through a mass of brunette curls, the voice spoke again.

"I know, I know. Not what you were expecting. Ooh, scary mutant girl," she said in a mock spooky voice. "You can freak out later, right now you need to pick the kid up and run away."

The ghostly young woman looked back over her shoulder as she finished emerging from the asphalt. Pointing, she said, "your friend's tough, but I'm not sure she can last much longer."

The girl was right. Eli could see Koriand'r had taken more direct blasts and while certain that she could win the fight in the long run, he didn't know what shape she would be in by the end if she continued to hold back. A predicament Eli knew he was partially responsible for as he had stressed earlier in the day she would have to be careful not to hurt anyone. He had been expecting regular thugs and criminals, though, not someone enhanced who could take a beating.

Right, he mentally agreed. Time to go.

Scooping up the green-skinned boy in his arms, Eli afforded a glance at his defeated attacker. The man was already recovering, albeit still clutching his gut in pain, and was dragging himself away from the conflict. He knew there was nothing that could be done now but leaving an attempted kidnapper and murderer behind to escape left a bad taste in Elijah's mouth. He turned to ask the ghost girl if she planned to follow but she had already disappeared as suddenly as had arrived.

He called out toward the duo still locked in battle. "Starfire, I've got the victim. Give me a thirty-second head start then follow me."

"But," Koriand'r ducked under an energy beam. "what of this man? Will he not escape?"

"Doesn't matter right now, the longer we stay here the more danger this kid is in. And I don't want you getting seriously hurt, either."

She hesitated for a moment before responding. "I understand. You will have your thirty seconds. Leave now, please."

The last thing Elijah saw before he turned and ran back down the labyrinth of an alley was another blast clip Koriand'r in the leg. Gritting his teeth and slinging the unconscious child over his shoulder, he forced himself to move quickly.

No shame in a retreat, Eli. He reassured his conflicted mind. Just keep the civilian safe. Make grandad proud.

He repeated this in his head like a comforting mantra as the young man and new hero carried the boy to safety.

Make grandad proud.
Does anyone here have plans for Marvel's Screaming Mimi/Songbird?

If not, I would like to utilize her for future arcs.

EDIT: Damn you, Hound.
Post will be up tomorrow.
A N N O U N C E M E N T:

CRISIS UPDATE:

The Crisis is now live. Players have the option of responding to either the New York or Star City threat although both situations are identical. As implied by the post, those affected are being controlled by the robots embedded on the back of their necks. Your characters will be faced with the dilemma of taking on the immediate threat to reduce collateral damage or searching for the source of the attack as described in the launch post.

Keep in mind that no matter which path you choose, you'll be facing severe adversity both from civilians who will refuse your help as they continue their blind assault and from those who have been elected to guard the source of the 'swarm'. To achieve the best possible outcome, you'll need to work together.

Best of luck to all involved and thank you for an amazing first season.


Since you continue to want feedback: this is another example of something I like to see. Brief clarification and slight guidance on the events so as to ensure minimal confusion and maximum cohesion.
@HenryJonesJr We also are all in the Discord. It's not to replace the OOC, but there's a lot of dialogue there between pretty much everyone. In case you cared to join.
Just to help clarify for future IC posts: mutants and metahumans are the same in this world. Metahumans are the 'official' term for those born with the metagene (also known as the X-Gene). Mutant is the derogatory term originally coined when metahuman numbers began to increase. Modern metahumans have been trying to retake the term for themselves.

This has been established through comments in the IC already, but just to avoid future confusion.
Hopefully, my exhausted brain didn't fuck up this new post too much.

Manhattan, New York City | Present Day

Chapter One | Part Four

Koriand'r tugged at the hem of her new top. The baby blue t-shirt felt snug on her frame and she had to keep adjusting it each time the material rode up along her midriff as she walked. Elijah had apologized in advance, having guessed on appropriate sizes for the alien woman and knowing most options weren't likely to fit properly. While the items he had called jeans seemed to fit relatively well, the strange articles of clothing that were meant to be worn under the outer garments were causing the usually cheerful alien to frown.

Shifting somewhat uncomfortably for the hundredth time since changing into these Earth clothes, Koriand'r spoke. "You are sure I am dressed correctly?"

The teenaged boy walking several steps ahead of her looked back over his shoulder. His eyes quickly glanced up and down, taking in her appearance, before averting his gaze abruptly.

"Uh, yeah. It's definitely right on you." Elijah told her, "I mean, they're on right. And you look good. Normal. I meant you look normal. Or about as normal as you can when you're nearly six feet tall with bright red hair that reaches your ankles. Not to mention the skin..."

She seemed to pay no mind to Eli's comments on her features, instead once more pulling the shirt back down over her bellybutton. "Then I respect the women of this planet greatly for enduring such uncomfortable conditions."

At the thought of uncomfortable conditions, Koriand'r's mind drifted momentarily. The image of her escape pod surrounded her, the incessant dull tones of the emergency alarms reverberating around the small, metal sphere. The endless black outside the viewpoint broken up every so often by distant flashes of white had been the only sign the pod was still moving forward. The stuffy heat and poorly recycled air seeming to cling to her more heavily over time.

"We're almost there." Eli's voice said from up ahead.

The now familiar sound broke the girl from her memories. Her cheerful smile once more returning as she skipped forward to match Elijah's pace.

"Remind me again where it is you are taking me?"

"Mainly, I just wanted you to walk through some more populated areas to see how much you stood out. If everyone's always staring at you then it'd be hard to do anything worthwhile. But aside from the typical looks girls like you get, doesn't seem like anyone really pays any close attention to you."

Koriand'r tilted her head inquisitively. "Girls like me?"

Eli afforded her another glance before continuing. "But, I figure since we're out here already and things seem to be going fine, that I might as well show you around the types of places I was planning on patrolling. I'm kinda winging this stuff, but I think it's best to stay out of the public eye. Stick to isolated areas with lots of alleys to avoid being seen.

"Probably means we'll be stuck handling petty crime, but whatever." He added. "It's still good work and if we stop even just one mugging I'll be proud. I'm just sorry that this might be a waste of your, uh, talents."

"Do not fret, Elijah. I am happy to be of assistance." Koriand'r rested a hand on his shoulder. "You have treated me very well and I wish to repay your kindness. Admittedly, I also wish to spend more time outdoors and to see more of your world."

Eli gave half a chuckle. "Yeah, I bet. You've been cooped up so long, first in space and now in the warehouse, I'd want to get out, too, if I were you."

Her smile nearly faltered as Eli's words threatened to recall those memories once more. "Yes... I think I prefer the outside."

* * *



Koriand'r kept her head on a constant swivel as Eli led her further into the city. Each new and strange aspect of this world caught her attention and several times her guide stopped and waited for her to continue moving on. Unlike her homeworld, most of what she had seen of this planet so far was developed. So little natural world was noticeable as their journey brought them deeper into the borough. Even the sky was tinged with signs of pollution; the normal light blues that were most prominent during these afternoon hours were streaked with dull greys and pale whites, which made for a stark contrast to Tamaran's own clear horizon.

She was unsure if she was sadder from this realization or more in awe at humanity's industrialization. Either way, Koriand'r had much to keep her thoughts preoccupied as they traveled. Be it the odd, combustion-based vehicles that ferried humans across the ground, the communication devices that seemed to be sources of addiction for most passing by, or the various aromas originating from carts on the street that kept causing her stomach to growl.

Earth cuisine, Koriand'r had experienced, was very rich in taste. Elijah had provided the alien refuge with several delicacies the past week, though she found herself favoring one far above the others. While the dishes known as pizza and fried chicken had been delicious, it was the instant ramen noodles that had captivated Koriand'r's tastebuds. She had been hesitant to ask for more after first savoring the meal as she knew something that satisfying must be expensive, and she had no desire to cause her new friend trouble, but Eli had insisted on bringing her ramen once a day since then.

Her chest warmed as she considered her good fortune. Perhaps most humans were kind, Koriand'r couldn't yet be sure, but instinct told her Elijah was special. She would never take for granted the level of compassion, generosity, and respect he had shown. His acceptance of a stranger, let alone a visitor from another solar system, had been extraordinary. After having been trapped in a metal cage hurtling through space for so long, being greeted by a welcoming individual had been a relief. Koriand'r had little doubt that, had Eli not been there during her landing, she could very well have found herself in a dangerous and stressful position. Elijah's genuine kindness notwithstanding, his role of guide in this strange, new world was also very appreciated.

"Starfire," Eli called out to her, using the English transliteration of her name. "We're here. Or, at least, the first stop."

Koriand'r took in her surroundings. The pedestrians they had walked amongst on their journey had gradually thinned out over the last twenty minutes, and now there was no sign of another living being around. The state of disrepair reminded her of the docks where Eli had provided a temporary home for her. Both had various one and two-story buildings lining the streets that were, for the most part, abandoned. Windows partially boarded up, brick walls marked with colorful words and pictures, often of graphic nature. Weeds and roots erupted from the concrete sidewalks. It looked to her as if this area had been partially forgotten to time.

"This is the meatpacking district," Eli offered up as an explanation. "It's just this small section that looks like this. Most of the rest of it, especially when you get up towards Eighth Avenue, is actually pretty nice. For a while, it used to all be pretty shit, but about twenty-five years ago they started renovating it all. Then a decade ago things really got serious, and if you head just half-a-dozen blocks in either direction it all gets pretty high-end."

He gestured towards the closed businesses before them. "This is really the last of what remains of all the seediness. Bunch of run-down butcheries, failed nightclubs, and the occasional adult store that's still in operation. Though, I think most of them are probably just prostitution rings if you ask me."

Koriand'r simply nodded enthusiastically, her near-permanent smile still etched upon her face as she absorbed all of this information. Most of it she grasped, though she was uncertain how feces could be seen as 'pretty'.

"And this is a place of reprehensible crime, yes?" She asked.

"Honestly?" Eli shrugged. "Probably not. Mostly just junkies here, I'd imagine. Maybe squatters. This is the lowest priority spot I'd want to patrol, really, but I thought it'd be a good introduction for you. Didn't want to start you off with anything too crazy, you know?"

Koriand'r didn't know, but she agreed nonetheless.

"Take a look around, though. Get a lay of the land."

Nodding, she lightly pushed off the ground and began to rise. Her long hair flowed behind her as she cleared the tops of the buildings, seeming to almost shimmer. From her vantage point, Koriand'r could see some distance away. She noticed, just as Eli had described, that not too far away the desolate streets turned into bustling centers of activity. As she climbed slightly higher in the air, something caught her eye. Some movement behind one of the abandoned structures from her peripheral, the vaguely recognizable shapes masked by shadow. She drifted closer, and she could hear Eli below her warning not to go too far.

"Elijah," she called down.

"Yeah?"

"I believe I have seen someone. But..."

"But what?"

Koriand'r hesitated. "Do humans often move through solid objects?"

"Uh, say again?" Eli cupped a hand to his ear, unsure he had heard the airborne woman correctly from his position on the ground.

"If I am not mistaken, I witnessed someone step through a wall and—" Koriand'r cut off abruptly as another shape drew her attention. "Oh, two more are approaching now."

Eli began to step into the alleyway above which Koriand'r was floating. He may be improvising his vigilante plan, but the young man was fairly sure strangers lurking about and displaying potential metahuman powers was a sign of something to come.

"There is a fourth individual now," Koriand'r continued narrating the events as she spied them from a distance. "This one is moving very silently. His stealth technique reminds me of the Okaaran—" Once again she cut off mid-sentence, this time her body stiffening.

"What is it, Starfire?" Elijah's pulse quickened as he noticed her tense up.

"The silent one has assaulted another, what looks to be a child. Elijah, I..."

He didn't wait for her to finish. "Go! I'll catch up."

Koriand'r hesitated, wondering if perhaps she had misinterpreted the events. She was still very much ignorant to Earth customs, and if she were wrong...

Her eyes focused on the now crumpled body of the child on the ground. A young boy who looked to be of similar age to her brother. Two of the other three figures she had previously spotted were standing over him discussing something. The first individual she had seen vanish into a wall still unaccounted for.

"Starfire, go!"

Eli's words broke through Koriand'r's doubt, and she balled her hands. She rocketed forward, the earlier shimmering appearance of her hair giving way to a blazing trail as the energy she channeled flowed out of her unregulated.

She was still more than a hundred feet away, and two dozen in the air, when the first figure returned. Koriand'r had almost missed them as she was focused on the unconscious boy.

"Hey! Hey, you! Get away from him!" The figure called out towards the two assailants.

The man who had moved swiftly without sound earlier whirled around to face the newcomer. He barely seemed to give any consideration to the words as he was already raising his right hand, extending his palm forward. Then, without warning, a blast of red energy erupted forth and consumed the would-be intervener. The beam collided with the wall, instantly melting the brick as if it had been wax. When the energy dissipated, there was nothing remaining of the figure, not even a hint of clothing.

No! Koriand'r's rage echoed in her mind, and she pushed herself forward with intensity, willing herself faster.

She closed the gap within a second, colliding with the powered individual and knocking him off his feet. His partner, another man, screamed and scrambled backward. Koriand'r remained floating several feet off the ground, staring heatedly at the man she just witnessed commit murder.

"You will stand down and surrender this instant." Her eyes glowed a fierce green as she pointed an accusatory finger at him.

The man rolled over, clutching his sore back, as he returned the stare up at his attacker. "No. I don't think I will."

Left-arm thrusting forward with unexpected speed, another burst of red energy launched out, this time completely enveloping Koriand'r.

Maneuvering through the back alleys less than two hundred feet away, Elijah Bradley heard the pained shouting of his friend and urged his body to run faster, desperate to reach her in time.
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