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@MonkeyBusiness, what is Iwagakure's focus as a nation?
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@Innue They are wary of the other nations. Until a year ago they were strong believers in isolationism. Ren as Kage is trying to change that mentality and open up some relations with the other nations.
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@MonkeyBusiness so they are focused on politics and opening new relationships with the other villages then?
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@yoshua171 At the moment yes. That is a reason why an invitation was send to the other Kage to come to Iwagakure's creation festival.
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@yoshua171 At the moment yes. That is a reason why an invitation was send to the other Kage to come to Iwagakure's creation festival.


Okay, I am going to have a bunch of characters show up then for you.
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@yoshua171 At the moment yes. That is a reason why an invitation was send to the other Kage to come to Iwagakure's creation festival.


Speaking of your village, you should find some time to write up your village sheet :P
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Just finished looking at all the characters. My idea is in the clear!
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Woot!
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Alright now that thaf was fixed (hopefully) i realized my cs is basically done. Let me know if theres anything i should fix/change
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Alright now that thaf was fixed (hopefully) i realized my cs is basically done. Let me know if theres anything i should fix/change


I think you'll want to spend a bit more time thinking through the bio. For a jounin, your character is very outclassed by many of the other characters (even some of the Gennin and Chuunin) and would have a hard time holding his own. I'm willing to help you out as much as I can with this, but I'd need to know a few things.

For starters, we need to decide how you want your character to actually operate in combat. What sorts of tactics does he prefer? What strengths does he have? What are his weak points? Does her prefer operating at ranged or does he like to get up close for his attacks? I do know your character probably would want to operate at close range given his name. It might be good to think through some tactics he could do with that (it would be potentially good based of the history for him to have begun to develop some elemental kenjutsu (sword techniques) after realizing it was a potent combination).

Some example techniques would be:
- <Jutsu Name> ignites his blade with a hot flame, extending the offensive reach of the weapon by a few feet as well as making the blade harder to avoid.
- Rekindle - With a strong Katon chakra nature, Akira is capable of reigniting any object or individual that has been hit in the last few seconds by his sword of his flame techniques with a lesser version of the flame technique already used. The longer he waits between utilizing Rekindle from the initial attack, the weaker Rekindle is. Rekindle cannot be used on Rekindle.

But without knowing more about your character, it is hard for me to offer more advice (it is also really late at night for me right now).

What I may suggest, especially given how cutthroat some of the characters can be in this thread, is to consider playing a lower ranked character, such as a Chuunin or even a Gennin (there is absolutely nothing wrong with that, plus with a gennin we could start a squad for Kyokujitsugakure). The advantage to this is you will A) be less of a target B) be under the protection of other high ranking members of your village. This will allow you to get ideas for additional techniques that your character can learn as he progresses (I know you are eager to jump in right now, but your character just isn't quite Jounin level), as well as learn from some of the more experienced fighters on the thread (combat roleplay can be challenging).

Just don't feel discouraged. There is a lot of people on the thread who can help if you really want to commit to that jounin or if you want to get into the thread quicker, consider a chuunin or even a gennin. I'll work with you on either way you want to go.
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Made some more edits since I couldn't seem to stay asleep. Still a WIP cause I need to complete History and Personality, along with Special Traits but Jutsu are finally done!

Work In Progress


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@Innue i appreciate the help I can agree on not quite beimg ready after having read some of the others so Genin level is perfect as are the ideas you suggested
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@Innue i appreciate the help I can agree on not quite beimg ready after having read some of the others so Genin level is perfect as are the ideas you suggested


Good! With one more genin I can do a squad for Kyokujitsu. :D
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haha okay who should our new victim...i mean friend be
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THIS IS ACTUALLY MY LAST ONE I PROMISE.



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Hiiiiii @Prince.
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Alright edits done hopefully this will be the final draft if not its all good. Fire away people.
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@Keyblade87

Accepted. Move him to the bin..
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Sweet thanks so much guys!
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