I need to finish my shit but I keep looking at everyone else's characters instead of mine...

@Blue Demon
Noriko is still good, but I don't like the "medical mode" technique that Umary has. For one it's a game technique and for two it's vague. I'm not gonna say to remove it but I'd like it if you personally defined it better to detail her rate of regeneration and her approximate increase in physical output. Likewise I don't like Chieko's "lighting instantaneous" because it is very similar to Body Flicker. I see you already put a limit on it regarding use in combat, but even still it's basically a get-out-of-jail-free card. Unless Partisan or Savato say it's cool, I'd like that to be removed.

Otherwise they seem good. I like their personalities and how they tie in together. Once those changes are made you'll have my approval of all three, though I already approve Noriko.

Honma Noriko [+]

“Power has only one duty - to secure the social welfare of the People.”
All hail Kim Jong Un!!

Noriko is the tallest sister standing at five foot seven. She has long red hair and green eyes. She's rather fond of eye makeup and usually adds something to make herself look more intimidating. Like the rest of the women in her family, she is built like a rectangle. She's flat with no assets to speak of. On the trade off she is very densely muscled.

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Personnel files.
Access only by security personnel with a C3 clearance.

【Full Name】
Honma Noriko

【Alias】
Nori

【Affiliation】
Confederation

【Age】
20

【Sex】
Female

【Sexuality】
Straight
As straight as wet spaghetti.

【Birthplace】
Kohona
Is this a new village?

【Rank】
Chūnin

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Psych. report.
Medical secrecy applies.

【Personality】
Noriko is the serious sister. She loves life and enjoys being a Ninja. However she isn't as competitive as her youngest sister. Nor does she feel obligated to be a Ninja. It merely was the logical decision in her mind. After all her parents were both ninjas and it felt natural to her. Overall Noriko is calculating. She comes across as cold to most people, but that's just because she doesn't care about them. The only people she cares about are her parents and her sisters. I like this.

Sometimes Noriko has problems determining right from wrong. Excessive from light handed. She also enjoys having power over other people. Though she does know that's not quite right. She also know if she's not careful she'll go down a dark path. When things don't go her way, she gets even later. She likes being late? I like this bit as well.

【History】
Norkio was the first born of her parents. Due to her parents both being Ninja, they were hardly around. Because of this it often feel to Noriko being the parent for her younger sisters. This propelled her to mature faster. Still, her nurturing nature made it's appearance and she never resented mothering her sisters.

With taking care of her siblings practically a full time job Noriko didn't have much use for friends. Instead she dedicated her free time to learning ninjutsu and taijutsu. When she was of age she joined the ninja academy in Kohona. She pushed herself a lot harder than her teammates and it caused a large amount of tension. For Noriko wanted to be a chūnin as fast as she could, but her teammates didn't.

Eventually she ditched her teammates to join another team, Daiki and Ichiro, going to the Chūnin Exams. Out of the three man team only Noriko and Daiki became chūnin. This severed all good will between Daiki and Ichiro. However during the exam Noriko and Daiki became friends which quickly progressed to lovers. Still it wasn't meant to last. Daiki resented how much time Noriko spent with her younger siblings and left her.
What an asshole.
Heartbroken, Noriko swore off men and became lesbian and instead redoubled her efforts on her shinobi skills. One day soon she hopes to become a Jounin and lead her own team. Probable.

【Family ties】
Noriko grew up in a ninja family. Her parents were often absent leaving her the responsibility to raise her siblings. This created a close bond between her and her siblings. All the women in her family, except Umary, are very competitive and hate to loose. Umary and their father are extremely laid back and often get walked over by the stronger personalities.

Honma Chou | Mother | 39, Kohona, Shinobi- Jounin
Honma Daichi | Father | 41, Kohona, Shinobi-Medical Nin
Honma Umary | Sister | 18, Kohona, Shinobi- Chūnin
Honma Cheiko | Sister | 16, Kohona, Shinobi- Chūnin
I see you adhered to the Japanese naming standard surname-firstname, making me look bad. BANNED.

【Dreams and fears】
Noriko dreams of becoming a Jounin and possibly even someone of vast influence. She fears being alone, having her family die or abandon her. Someday she hopes that Daiki will come back to her and they'll marry and have children of their own.

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Combat reports.
Gathered from evaluation reports after missions.

【Fighting style】
Noriko fights in a wide array of martial arts. She utilizes whatever will take down her opponent quickly. Whether it is close combat or sniping them from a distance. Because of this she likes to fight smart, not hard.

【Ninja techniques】

A rank techniques:
None
You sure? I like underdogs, but maybe add 1 just to be sure.

B rank techniques:
Katon: Gōryūka no Jutsu
Katon: Gōka Mekkyaku
Both good. I love fire jutsu's.

C rank techniques:
Katon: Ryūka no Jutsu
Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu
Katon: Hōsenka no Jutsu
All good.

D-E rank techniques:
Katon: Karyūdan
Like above.

【Weaponry, tools and objects.】
Weapon, tool or object name:
Wakizashi
Weapon type:
Short Sword
Description:
An average short sword with a ridged spine.

I'm not sure what a ridged spine is but I assume it's with the little inlets? Anyway..

Accepted.

Honma Umary [+]

“Is solace anywhere more comforting than that in the arms of a sister?”
I mean, have you ever had a real life sibling? If you're ever in their arms either you are being held in a chokehold, or you're dying.

Umary is the middle child in both height and age. Umary stands at five foot five. She has long light red hair that she usually wears half up. The barrettes she wears were given to her by her siblings, one each. Unlike her siblings Umary is very curvy. She's also a little more on the chubby side. Her eyes are more blue than green. Like her older sister she has no identifying marks.

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Personnel files.
Access only by security personnel with a C3 clearance.

【Full Name】
Honma Umary

【Alias】
Doc

【Affiliation】
Undecided

【Age】
18
She's legallllll.....

【Sex】
Female

【Sexuality】
Straight

【Birthplace】
Kohona
Seriously, what is this new village? Is it canon?

【Rank】
Chūnin

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Psych. report.
Medical secrecy applies.

【Personality】
Umary is the cheerful middle child. She loves life and wants to enjoy it to the fullest. As the middle child Umary is often the last to be noticed. Sandwiched between two strong personalities she is often forgotten. But Umary often likes it best that way. She is often away from home spending time with friends.
Sounds cool.

Because of this she was the most reluctant to become a Ninja. She would have rather not, but felt pressured it join. In the end she decided she could do good for shinobi. She is happy that the world is at peace. But the cracks in the peace worry her. Mostly her worries center around her sisters who are pulling opposite directions.
Smart girl.

【History】
Umary was the middle child. Her earliest memories were of being taken care of by Noriko. It's strange, but her elder sister was always more of a mother to her. When her mother, Chou, actually began to be home for longer periods of time, it was an adjustment for all of them. At first Umary resented it. Her mother was a strong woman and often dismissed Umary out of hand because of her docile nature. Mothers can be cruel. Dads, dads is where the good stuff's at. Not really.

Adding to her mother's return was the pressure to live up to their family's legacy. Eventually the desire to be loved and accepted drove Umary to becoming a Genin. It was at this point that her mother actually acknowledged her as a member of the family.

Umary's time as a Genin wasn't the best time of her life. She spent a lot of time over at her teammate's homes and away from hers. In a way she was closer to others than her own family. It was during this time that she was happy to discover her abilities were like her father's. When she made the switch over to focusing on medical techniques life picked up. It was also in this same time period that her father returned from his missions and began to teach her his skills.

Life of Umary was picking up. She had good friends. The love of her father. Noriko who loved her and Cheiko who was like a little puppy. With the help of her family she was able to pass the Chunin Exams. Ironically she was on the same team as her youngest sister Cheiko. As of the moment Umary is very happy being a chunin and has no further designs on upward movement.

【Family ties】
Umary's parents were never at home during her younger years. Instead she was raised by her elder sister Noriko. When her mother came back home she ended up spending most of her time away from them and with her friend's family where she found nurturing environments. Because of this her bond to her family isn't as strong as her sisters. Though she loves her father very much.

Honma Chou | Mother | 39, Kohona, Shinobi- Jounin
Honma Daichi | Father | 41, Kohona, Shinobi-Medical Nin
Honma Noriko | Sister | 20, Kohona, Shinobi- Chūnin
Honma Cheiko | Sister | 16, Kohona, Shinobi- Chūnin

【Dreams and fears】
Umary's dreams are simple. She wants to retire in a small village and live out her years in peace. Maybe she might even marry a man who is a little simple and have peaceful children. Umary fears war. She gonna have a bad time. War in her family or war in the world. Both are equally bad in her book. She also fears death. Unfortunately for Umary she knows peace never lasts and her dreams will never come true and she will undoubtedly die in battle. Well that's dark.

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Combat reports.
Gathered from evaluation reports after missions.

【Fighting style】
Umary is a defensive fighter. All her main skills are focused on healing. Heard this one last time around. Character didn't last long.

【Ninja techniques】

A rank techniques:
Shōsen Jutsu
Cool, not really A rank in my book but I guess.

B rank techniques:
Chakura no Mesu
Dokugiri
Sweet.

C rank techniques:
Rinshin There's an error in this URL, you need to remove the K at the end of ''needles''. That aside it's fine.
Shikomishindan

D-E rank techniques:
None

【Weaponry, tools and objects.】
Weapon name:
Naginata
Weapon type:
Bladed Stick
Description:
A pole arm with a blade on top.
Not just ANY naginata, it's a medical naginata. You know, for precision incisions.

Tool Name:
Double Edge Needles
Description:
Double edged metal needles. Mostly used in medical ninjustsu. Can be used as an offense if pressed.
Senbon are powerful tools. Just ask Ayame.

ACCEPTED.

Kohona
Seriously, what is this new village? Is it canon?

-For medic middle sis. To be honest I'd judge Mystical palm as something that can be gauged. A rank being perfect mastery, you can heal even a bite from a Walking Dead zombie. Yeah top tier. I suppose that's about right?
Poison mist is pretty nasty. Instant kill gasses are a no go. I heavily recommend having a different effect or simply nerfing it.
And yeah Game only moves should be custom. We're not fan of those.

-For tryhard younger sister. Okay the Body flicker thing won't do for all three of us you get the point.
Dendou Bakuhatsu no Jutsu (Electric Detonation Technique) - There's something called Lightning release clone that does that. It's A rank/ I assume the electrocution is much weaker?

@Blue Demon Noriko is accepted, I said that in mine.