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That's the thing, in absence of light, there isn't really anything to manipulate. You could just say that it's a form of light manipulation - but I can't really make sense out of solidifying it. Maybe the teleportation/pocket dimension - but not solidifying it. Even then, the "darkness portal" power's aren't well defined as say Alice's (What are the weaknesses?).

The other big thing I noted is that Wei doesn't seem like an original character. It kinda feels like you took Wei Shen from Watch Dogs, gave him a different backstory (With some differences), and threw superpowers on him.


Im going to try and think of ways I can make umbrakinesis make more sense, possible ideas are
  • Elaborate more on the cloaking/teleporting/pocket dimension whilst completely axing powers of solidification. This would operate under the presumption that cloaking was a light manipulation (manipulating absence of light in this case) and explore darkness portal powers more thoroughly.
  • In terms of physics, an object is said to be dark when it absorbs photons, causing it to appear dim compared to other objects. For example, a matte black paint does not reflect much visible light and appears dark, whereas white paint reflects much light and appears bright. Therefor manipulation of darkness on a scientific level is a manipulation of photons.
  • Shadow dimension (?) [this would hinge a little more on paranormal]


As far as the Wei Shen qualm goes; I see where you're coming from. I did take inspiration from Sleeping dogs (as evident by the picture and appearance & name), however changing his backstory kind of seems like a different character to me. I mean isn't that what makes a character; his story? I would not say I copied Wei Shen's character, however I drew inspiration from that cast of characters as I wanted to make a Triad character. For instance, if I was to take away the name and appearance of my character you would not believe my character was Wei Shen. I dunno, just my thoughts.
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Sorry for being inactive. Last week was pretty much all tests and essays jammed into one week, so I didn't have much time to do much. And with easter and everything... but I can post now, if you'll still have me.
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Yeah, Easter has been busy. Busy busy weekend. I can have my next post up tomorrow.
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Hi, nice to meet everyone. I thought this looked fun, and hope that I can get in on it~
I have a couple of friends making characters as well, which is why I referenced their characters in mine.
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I hope I did well enough! C:
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As far as the Wei Shen qualm goes; I see where you're coming from. I did take inspiration from Sleeping dogs (as evident by the picture and appearance & name), however changing his backstory kind of seems like a different character to me. I mean isn't that what makes a character; his story? I would not say I copied Wei Shen's character, however I drew inspiration from that cast of characters as I wanted to make a Triad character. For instance, if I was to take away the name and appearance of my character you would not believe my character was Wei Shen. I dunno, just my thoughts.


You do have a bit of a point there. That was just my note.

Im going to try and think of ways I can make umbrakinesis make more sense, possible ideas are

  • Elaborate more on the cloaking/teleporting/pocket dimension whilst completely axing powers of solidification. This would operate under the presumption that cloaking was a light manipulation (manipulating absence of light in this case) and explore darkness portal powers more thoroughly.
  • In terms of physics, an object is said to be dark when it absorbs photons, causing it to appear dim compared to other objects. For example, a matte black paint does not reflect much visible light and appears dark, whereas white paint reflects much light and appears bright. Therefor manipulation of darkness on a scientific level is a manipulation of photons.
  • Shadow dimension (?) [this would hinge a little more on paranormal]


The first point would work best, I believe. Second idea does make sense. Third idea is a whole 'nother discussion.




Sorry for being inactive. Last week was pretty much all tests and essays jammed into one week, so I didn't have much time to do much. And with easter and everything... but I can post now, if you'll still have me.

Yeah, Easter has been busy. Busy busy weekend. I can have my next post up tomorrow.


I was pretty busy, too. Due to classes and stuff. Though, I should be fine for a bit. I do wish to see posts from both of you.




A triple helping of new characters.

All tied to each other.

My favorite!

@EstABest She seems good thus far, I just want to know the upper limits of her power. How strong can her sound attacks go? Love the Jojo reference btw.

@FamishedPants I think you need to define the ability a bit better. So his power is basically portals, and temporarily splitting objects? I'm a tad confused on that, and I think it could use some more limits.

@ADamnFiddle Now her power is the one I've been having trouble with. I'm really not sure what exactly she can do because you were vague on it. Perhaps you can add a few examples of what she's capable of? I also find it odd that a "Natural slacker" that "gets by doing the bare minimum" can be good at the other three skills you mentioned. :P
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I've been quietly considering a character for this. Would it be acceptable if I proposed a more antagonistic character?
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I've been quietly considering a character for this. Would it be acceptable if I proposed a more antagonistic character?




Sure. I have an antagonist in the form of Veronica.

And I probably don't owe you that much, but thanks for your post in the recruitment thread.

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I'll read up on Veronica then, see if that helps with direction. I am still a bit stumped on some aspects.

You're welcome! I just thought it was pretty back-handed of him and I knew instantly that it was coming from his character's denial. As I said, I've seen him quite a lot and Light is the only character I've ever really see him play.
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I'll read up on Veronica then, see if that helps with direction. I am still a bit stumped on some aspects.


I can always give you some ideas. I aim to please, after all.
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@Mr Allen J Sure! I'd like some suggestions.
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@Mr Allen J Sure! I'd like some suggestions.


First!

What kind of character are you going for?
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@Mr Allen J Well I'm already doing a snotty actress who has the power to form crystal in another thread so anything but that.

In truth I'm not really sure. I'm considering someone who just gets a kick out of being vile with an equally disturbing power like remolding her own or the deceased's flesh and bone.
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In truth I'm not really sure. I'm considering someone who just gets a kick out of being vile with an equally disturbing power like remolding her own or the deceased's flesh and bone.


Hmph. Who knows. This kind of character would fit in well with the Changelings.

It also depends on how you want to be antagonistic. Like the direct way (Actually going out and wrecking shit), or the indirect way (Like a crime boss throwing his minions at people). Who knows, maybe we can come up with a plot.
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@Mr Allen J Alright. I need to read the front page a bit more to get a sense of what is going on.
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Hey can I also get some suggestions for my character too? I want to make my guy a kinda a snarky, high schooler but I feel that he's just kinda plain and I'd like to make him more interesting.
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@Mr Allen J Alright. I need to read the front page a bit more to get a sense of what is going on.


Take your time, and direct any questions you have to me.

Hey can I also get some suggestions for my character too? I want to make my guy a kinda a snarky, high schooler but I feel that he's just kinda plain and I'd like to make him more interesting.


Hmmm... Plain isn't bad, but this is a tough one, but take a look at this:

reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/comments/2..

Otherwise, I'd look at characters made by other people you find interesting and study them. Think about what makes them interesting to you.
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@Mr Allen J So Ashing... Let's say a skin and bone manipulator also has the ability to rapidly regenerate wounds because, well, it'd be necessary after using that power. Would that rapid regeneration then help that someone if they were Ashing?

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Thanks for that link, it's really useful. For my character I was thinking it be a relatively normal dude wanting a simple life but is then forced out of it via his meta-human powers.
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