[OOC] Fate/Exit Order (Discontinued)

[The Red Seelie]

And the reward for best resting bitch face goes to

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Class: Rider
True Name: Quetzacoatl
Origin: Aztec Mythology
Height/Weight: 181cm and 64kg
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Personality:
A god of peace and tranquillity, A lover of humans and lucha libre alike. Quetzacoatl is a goddess that takes the enigmatic older sister personality fitting of her when it comes to being a guiding hand. She is a bright optimist with a smiling face that will surely lift the hearts of men that gaze upon it, refusing to let that brightness extinguish no matter what may fall upon it. Never the less Quetzalcoatl is still a divine existence and thus thinks on the scope of a goddess meaning that in the event of something bad, she may be quick to pass swift and brutal judgement upon the accursed.

Communications wise, she fully embraces the doctrine of 'everything will be ok' with a smiling face and optimistic voice. She loves humans not because of what humans are but because human growth is inherently beautiful, she loves humans as a species not as individuals and thus seeks to protect them and nurture the seeds of growht within them.

It is said that when approached with alcohol she will drink it, even though she is the type to say 'no more' due to an event in her past involving a celibate priestess

— Parameters —
STR: B | END: B | AGI: B+ | MAG: EX | LCK: A+ | NP: EX

— Class Skills —

Magic Resistance: A

Cancel spells of A-Rank or below, no matter what High-Thaumaturgy it is. In practice, the Servant is untouchable to modern magi, so it would not be an exaggeration to title the Servant a 'Magus Killer'

Riding: EX

It is possible for her to operate all vehicles and beasts freely. She is a Dragon God, so she can also manage even the Dragon Kinds that falls outside the category of the Riding Skill..

— Personal Skills —

Goddesses Divine Core: EX

A Skill that expresses one being a perfected goddess since birth. It has the effect of preserving the absoluteness of the mind and body. It repels all mental interferences, prevents the body from growth, and prevents the figure from change no matter how many calories are absorbed. It is a composite Skill that comprises the Skill Divinity.

Good Gods Wisdom: A+

A Skill that shows the wisdom of having taught many people, warped by her current disposition towards humanity. Except for those that are a burden to the body (such as Divinity) and those that are characteristic of certain heroes (E.g Mystic eyes / Innocent monster), many Skills can be practically demonstrated at a proficiency of A Rank. t is also possible to endow these Skills towards other Servants. If one has sufficient magical energy, it is also possible to endow them to existences that are not Servants

Originally, it is a kind of Authority, but it has deteriorated into a Skill

Charisma: A+

The natural talent to command an army. Increases the abilities of allies during group battles. Sometimes a god who watches over civilization, or sometimes a king who governs over the country, it is possible to say that Quetzalcoatl’s charisma is almost of the highest rank.

— Armaments —
While she prefers to fight hand to hand, due to the thrill of defeating a hated enemy, she may make use of her sword, Macana, a blade characteristic of aztec culture

— Noble Phantasms —

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Xiuhcoatl

Xiuhcoatl

Flame, Burn Even God to Ashes

Type: Anti-Unit

Rank: EX

Range 1

Maximum Number Of Targets: 1

The second coming of the flames that burned down her own palace in order to prevent the Evil God Tezcatlipoca from acquiring its many treasures, during a time when Quetzalcoatl was leaving the Aztecs before. Flames envelop the surroundings, and enemies are temporarily prevented from invoking the True Name release of their Noble Phantasms...

However, this Noble Phantasm has become extremely ridiculous because of the person’s addiction to lucha libre. Basically, she spins the opponent around in the air and drops them on the top of their head in a piledriver, or accordingly to the situation presented, she might aim to kick the opponent from a height of 1000 meters, becoming a strike as if it is a meteor. The person herself calls it the Ultimo Tope Patada.

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Quetzalcoatl

Quetzalcoatl

The Winged Servant

Type: Anti-Army

Rank: A

Range 2~80

Maximum Number Of Targets: 200

This Noble Phantasm became the reason that Quetzalcoatl has the Rider-class. She summons the Quetzalcoatlus, a Cretaceous-era pterosaur that was given a name deviated from her own’s, and rides it. It is a Phantasmal Species on the Phantasmal to Divine Beast level, which is also far more powerful than the Quetzalcoatlus that actually lived in the Cretaceous period. The Quetzalcoatlus is known as the largest flying animal in history. During the moment of its True Name release, the mounted Quetzalcoatl is able to perform the manipulation of large-scale lightning, winds and rains.

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Piedra Del Sol

Piedra Del Sol

The Sun Stone

Type: Anti-Army~Anti-Fortress

Rank: EX

Range 10~99

Maximum Number Of Targets: 900

The trump card of Quetzalcoatl. The megalith of the ancient Aztecs. The Aztec calendar said to show all the world’s past and present. This megalith with a 3.75-meter diameter appears overhead, this being a “gate”, and it drags out a portion of her Authority because of Quetzalcoatl being the great foundation of this very activity. Intense solar winds rampage over a vast range, and they will certainly be reflected as god’s Brilliance itself.

Quetzacoatl, a re-application to replace medusa since I feel I wouldn't do medusa's personality justice

plus I want to wrestle, and help scathach with the mooncell education system, and tombstone giant monsters.

[SSW]

Decided to throw in an app. Theseus is such a bully.

Just a Pig

Class: Rider

True Name: Phaea

Titles: Crommyonian Sow, The Sow

Alignment: Chaotic Evil

Source: Greek Legend

Attribute: Sky

Armament: Hammer

Personality:

The type of uncouth and rowdy woman who would earn the nickname, ‘the sow’. Lustful, aggressive and greedy, one who can be considered as much beast as woman.

One who has no consideration for human civilisation, believing that the strength to take what you desire is all that matters. In short, someone who cannot be considered a hero at all.

History:

Frankly, little more than a footnote. Another in a list of monsters effortlessly dispatched by that shining hero, the monster slayer Theseus.

Whether ‘Phaea’ is the pig or the woman who raised it is unclear. In this case, the servant is both the uncouth bandit woman known as ‘the sow’ referred to by Plutarch, as well as the monstrous sow, the mother of the more impressive Calydonian Boar, slain by Theseus.

One of the group of dreaded bandits: Periphetes, Sinis, Sciron, Cercyon and Procrustes. Well, despite this, it seems that she’s the only one that Theseus made an effort to track down and kill, rather than retaliating to one who disturbed him on the road. Perhaps that speaks to the chaos she was causing.

Parameters:

Strength: A
Endurance: B
Agility: B
Mana: D
Luck: D

Skills

Class Skills

Riding: A

An ability of the Rider class, denoting the ability to ride various vehicles and mounts. At this rank, Monstrous Beasts can be ridden.

Magic Resistance: D

Skill that grants protection against magical effects. At this rank, it can cancel out single-action spells.

Personal Skills

Monstrous Strength: A

A skill that grants a temporary rank-up to strength due to one’s status as a monster.

Monster Creation: A

The ability to give birth to and raise a monster. The natural skill for one whose own fame was overshadowed by her child.

Noble Phantasms

Crommyonia Metamorphosis
Chaos Sow Destruction

Rank: C+
Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
Range: 0
Targets: 1

The ability to take the form of the Crommyonian Sow, a Monstrous Beast slain by Theseus.

In normal circumstances, the Noble Phantasm is permanently active, changing Phaea’s status to a ‘monstrous human’, increasing her parameters in a fashion similar to a Berserker - though in Phaea’s case, her mental faculties are not impeded. Perhaps this is because her intelligence and aggression are fundamentally near-animalistic to begin with.

Utilising the true name, it is possible to fully take the form of the Monstrous Beast that is Phaea’s true form, massively increasing in size and power, though losing one’s ability to act as a human. Under normal circumstances, it is not possible to return to one’s ‘human’ state after activating this Noble Phantasm.

Agrius Huios
Boar of Divine Punishment

Rank: A+
Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
Range: 1
Targets: 1

The boar of Divine Punishment, born from Phaea and sent by Artemis to ravage Calydon. Rather than a wild boar, it is a monster in the form of a boar, taking this particular shape due to its mother. A monstrous beast of enormous size that rampaged without pause, requiring a gathering of various heroes to be able to match it.

However, its disposition is different around its mother. Surprisingly, out of the two of them, it is the more subdued. Perhaps it’s even embarrassed by its mother’s behaviour? Even so, the bond between them is strong, and the two act as one in battle.

[Parallel Hearts]

Apologies for the longer than usual delay.

Let me see what I have to address, before having the IC up and running.

@Parallel Hearts@floodtalon@Moonlit Sonata@DocRock@Crusader Lord@Reflection@1Charak2@SubjectVision@Pyromania99@Cu Chulainn@Breo@Rune_Alchemist@Duoya
discord.gg/qAmQSf

@Red Alice

Thanks. I'll take a look at this later, when I have some proper time.

@Cu Chulainn@Pyromania99@1Charak2
If you wish to change characters for some reason, you are welcome to do so. Just be sure to make a choice you feel comfortable with, since that's the most important thing.

@Froppy
D'Artagnan seems alright, you can move him to the Character's tab if you want.

So just a quick question.

Due to issues with Neil(mostly worrying I couldn't do him justice), decided to look at Henry Ford as I think I noted before, unsure. But anyway, did some digging and found someone had done him before in the make a servant thread. Not planning to take the entire sheet of course, no no, but I was wondering if it'd be fine to use some elements from it? For inspiration, since I'm doing Rider, rather than Caster.

If there's an issue with that, I'll work completely on my own of course.

http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread.php/6950-Create-A-Servant-2?s=4e46536aa078646bb099ed9826938475&p=2463309&viewfull=1#post2463309

@DocRock

Well, I have nothing against taking inspiration from someone else's version of an OC Servant. Creativity isn't a limitless resource, after all, especially when it comes to this issue. You are free to do as you wish.

@Breo
He's alright now. You can post him in the CS tab as well.

@GreenGoat
Hanzo is ok as well. You can do as the others.

@Player 2
I'll take a better look at this Asterios later since it's a modified version of his already existing canon self, so I have to analyze him with a bit of caution.

@1Charak2
If Quetz is your final choice, she's ok. Just bear in mind what I said above since changing characters after they are already in the IC will likely not be possible.

@SSW
This choice is rather unexpected to say the truth, but I don't see anything out of the ordinary with it. And, given that Atalanta is a precedent of beastly looking Servant, you can go forward with it. You can move her to the CS tab like the others.

[Parallel Hearts]

And the IC is up. Anyway that has an approved character is ok to begin posting.

I'll assign the places in the character's list sometime during this week, to see how far we are from maximum capacity.

[The Red Seelie]

@Parallel Hearts

Ay, Quetz is my final choice, Just wanted to play a better team player in all regards

[Cu Chulainn]

On second thought, things have come up and I don't think I'll be able to participate. Good luck, everyone!

EDIT:
Maybe I'll stick around after all~

[DocRock]

@Parallel Hearts
Thanks for the feedback, and never worry about delays, I just wrapped up a big assignment for college, so I'm gonna work on Ford now probably. May just switch back to Caster, unless I do what I saw someone else do with Neil Armstrong, via giving him a skill that makes his Riding EX rank when flying, but with Ford would be EX when inside an automobile or any wheeled transport that came after him.

I dunno, I'm still trying to figure out good Noble Phantasms.

[DocRock]

Used a Neil and Henry Ford pair of sheets I saw as for inspiration for ranks of certain skills, while also taking my own take on the NPs used by the Ford sheet. Additionally, used one of my assigned books for a Material Culture class to help with the final Phantasm. I hope this is acceptable. Couldn't get the picture I needed, due to PC Discord being bugged on my end, but one of the others can show it if needed.

I'll confess freely, made him Rider to have him stand out more from Edison his mentor, and also to nod to his impact on history(given how massive the industry is now). I can easily make changes as needed though.

Father of Innovation

Class: Rider

True Name: Henry Ford

Origin: Historical Fact, American History

Height/Weight: 1.87 Meters, 120 Kilograms(not familiar heavily with metric tbh, hope its acceptable)

Appearance: Manifesting not in his true prime of youth, but rather at the age where he was most known for his deeds, Rider still is rather fit, dressed in the attire of an American gentleman, bluish hair kept neat. He is otherwise unremarkable, but has the sensation of a grandfather figure.



Alignment: Lawful Good
Personality:
As the man who changed the face of industry forever, one might expect Rider to be a proud figure who uses his status to brag, but in reality, he's a kind, gentle man, who cares for the wellbeing of his master, as well as those around him, just as he did towards the workers whose lives he made easy. He tries his best to be helpful and kind, but it seems that his nature has been somewhat influenced by human history, giving him not only a love of driving, but also a desire to see the world opened up by his innovations. And yet, he seems to enjoy walking off the beaten path, to enjoy nature, and study history. He seeks the most efficient course, to better the lives of mankind, enjoying what the future brings, and how it has improved what he dreamed of, affordable cars.

Despite all of this, he harbors an amount of hesitation, and reservation, when it comes to remembering his own mistakes during life, such as his antisemitism, due to the atrocities of the Second World War caused by Nazi Germany. His awareness of how human history, namely American, has progressed, makes him regret his own backwards view on various racial groups, and shows a desire to make up for his mistakes as best able. Truly a grandfather figure whose wisdom has come to change them for the better.

Backstory: No deviations from the canon material(aka human history)

— Parameters —
STR: E | END: E | AGI: D | MAG: C | LCK: B | NP: A(?)
Note: More or less borrowed paramaters from the other sheet, may adjust if requested.

— Class Skills —
Riding: C(EX)
While a rank that normally would not make sense for qualifying of the Rider Class, Henry Ford's nature as the Father of the Automobile allows this to be changed.

Item Creation: C+
Due to his life as a machinist and the inventor of the cheap automobile, Rider has been given a skill that would normally be of the Caster class.

— Personal Skills —
Innovation (Automobile): A Rank
Allows Rider to modify existing wheeled transports to improve their condition, while also making anything he uses more effective against those using transports that predate his own(example, gaining an edge against a chariot due to being more advanced)

Father of Automobiles: EX Rank
A skill that represents his status not as the inventor of the Automobile, but as the one who made them cheap and affordable to the masses. No matter what age it comes from, so long as it is an automobile that comes after his time, or is considered a successor to his work, Rider's Riding Rank rises to EX so long as he is in the driver's seat. He still needs time to get used to something, but when combined with the right materials, allows him to perform feats that would be otherwise unfeasible(such as pulling a Tokyo Drift with an eighteen wheeler)
Note: This is akin to the skill that Neil Armstrong had on a character sheet idea, but for automobiles, if this is an issue, I can fix it.

Mass Production: EX Rank
Allows him to mass produce items on a scale almost unimagineable even to servants of the modern era. While not the one to invent the idea, Ford completely changed it through his actions, making it so that when one things of say, the assembly line, they associate it with Ford. Tied with his first Noble Phantasm, this makes him an impressive ally, even if weak due to his modern status.

Charisma: C Rank
Instead of being able to lead an Army, allows him to manage a company.

— Armaments —
Oridinary old-fashioned umbrella, hickory walking stick

— Noble Phantasms —
The Ford Motor Company
The Innovation of Tomorrow
Rank: A
Type: Fortress/Support
Target: "None"
Description: A Noble Phantasm that represents all that Ford achieved with his company. Akin in nature to the Phantasm known as the Hanging Gardens of Babylon, it is something that through mana and resources must be constructed first, in order to be used. Manifesting as a factory, it allows him to mass produce not only Model-Ts, but any automobile that came after him, so long as he possesses the materials needed to build such, and the time to readjust his production lines. Due to its ability to be built multiple times, it is A rank due to mass usage. Additionally, once built for a period of eight hours each day, from Monday to Friday, familiars based upon the workers whose lives he improved manifest inside any constructed factories, and set to work, using the machines inside to churn out machinery. Truly a representative of his dream. Despite being a "fortress," it can be easily destroyed.

The Model-T
The First Automobile
Rank: D
Type: Anti-Unit, Anti-Army
Targets(s): 1-99
Description: While not the first car to ever be made, the Model T, also known as the Tin Lizzie, was the first cheap and affordable car to be made, as a result of Ford's efforts to improve the lives of his fellow Americans. Appearing as it did in life, the Model T however has been strengthened as a result of Ford becoming a Heroic Spirit. Capable of moving at speeds exceeding Mach 1 when supplied sufficient mana, it can perform maneuver that would have been impossible in the original age, due to being the "prototype" and "blueprint" of all automobiles to come after, channeling humanity's achievements. Due to being able to be mass-produced by Ford's factories, the cars are stored in an unspecified location and can be called out by Ford for usage. While mostly like a fly's bite to most servants, if rigged with explosives, they make a rather nice looking blast, in homage to the countless stunt car explosions in Hollywood.

Greenfield Village
Ford's Apology and Love Letter to History
Rank: D
Type: Anti-Unit/Support/Anti-Self
Number of Targets: 1-99
Description: A lesser known part of Ford's impact on history, the Greenfield Village was a homage to the past, and a clue to Ford's slight nervousness about the future initially, as well as a love song to the city of Detroit. Much like his first Phantasm, it is one that can be constructed within the world, however, due to its overall purpose, small parts can be temporarily summoned, though for a very short time due to his mana supply. As a tribute to many historical places, it offers a small boost to any servants that enter its vicinity who have a connection. For example, were Edison to enter the village, he would gain the benefit of not needing to manifest his workshop, due to a recreation of Menlo Park being already present, akin to how Lincoln would be slightly boosted due to a courthouse was packed up and moved that he had worked in. Greenfield's true ultimate purpose is simple, to offer allied servants, and even enemies, a place to not only relax, but also hold peacetalks, should the need for a meeting place be arranged. It's also heaven on earth for children servants, due to its ability to have new buildings and structures added, as the site has been added onto even after Ford passed.

[Scallop]

This wouldn't happen to still be open would it? I've got some character ideas that would be great for this.

[SubjectVision]

@Parallel Hearts

This is a note that I'll be switching from Assassin Fierro to a Ruler George Orwell.

[Parallel Hearts]

This wouldn't happen to still be open would it? I've got some character ideas that would be great for this.

@Scallop

Yes, we are. You'll be the last new player slot I'll be taking for now.

[Parallel Hearts]

@DocRock

I don't think that there's anything wrong with Ford. You can post him on the CS tab.

@Parallel Hearts

This is a note that I'll be switching from Assassin Fierro to a Ruler George Orwell.

@SubjectVision

Very well then. Just like I said to the others, be sure that you are picking something you really want to, before making your final decision.

[Parallel Hearts]

@Player 2

I'm sorry but I'll have to ask you to rewrite that Asterios' CS from the beginning. While I understand that Servants that are featured exclusively on Fate/Grand Order can feel rather incomplete sometimes (lacking some base consistency and trait that Servants from other works in the Franchise would normally have, not to say anything of over-inflated skill ranks just for mechanical gameplay purposes), this CS lacks some basic understanding of how Asterios has been portrayed as a character through the whole of his appearances in the story/events.

I'm just asking that, if you are making him in the same class and all that, you keep him a little closer to his canon portrayal.

[DocRock]

@Parallel Hearts

Phew, glad Ford's fine, I'll move him over now, and get started on an in character post.

[Crusader Lord]

Knight with a Shield

Class: Shielder (can also be Berserker or Saber)

True Name: Sir Sagramore, "Knight of the Round Table", "King of Britain", "Lord of the Second Round Table", "Sagramore Constantine"

Origin: Arthurian Legends and associated Arthurian materials

Height/Weight: 165cm (height)/51kg (weight)

Appearance: [Hider Below has the image]

Behold

Alignment: Neutral Good

Personality: A brave knight with a thing for "cute damsels" and beautiful women, not afraid to flirt or do her best around them to try to impress, though who is truly good at heart when to comes down to it. She has a quick temper, which due to her Riastrad is normally paired with a very healthy appetite and love of food. She also has a soft spot for her friend in arms, a great friend even, Sir Tristan. Despite the sad knight's melancholy moods, she is of the sort who would try to snap him out of it or at least be there for the man and try to raise his spirits. It was because she understood the hearts of others well enough that she kept tabs on him even after he left the round table, that she took his words about the king to heart, that she was among those who most mourned his death after announcing it to the Round Table. That weight that Tristan couldn't handle, however, Sagramore bore in his place at the king's side till the very end.

She never hated her cousin, King Arthur, and even loved her and served her despite the secret of her sex. She even cared about Mordred, who to her mind was like a brother, despite being stuck nearly dead by him as they came to blows. The ability to understand the hearts of men was never said to be an easy one, she knew more than the former king ever did, but as the old round table scattered and she rose as the heir to King Arthur her great resolve became clear. Sagramore continued to prove herself no less than valiant and brave as she held the nation together with her own two hands, and assembled the Second Round Table to help her improve where the first had failed. She gathered her people together as the focus of their praise and hopes, continued to hold back the Saxons, and paved a glorious legend into the annals of human history. Though she has her own regrets, from having to fight Mordred and Gawain in the past to not being able to save her best friend, as a heroic spirit she doesn't desire to try to change the past. What matters to her is moving forward, bearing the weight of the past that one must bear, and forging ahead into the future.

— Parameters —

STR: A | END: A | AGI: B | MAG: C| LCK: C+ | NP: A+

— Class Skills —

Magic Resistance: C

-grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether.

Cancel spells with a chant below two verses. Cannot defend against magecraft on the level of High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals.

Riding: B

-Most vehicles and animals can be handled with above average skill, even vehicles that did not exist in the time period one was alive in, for they are no exception. However, cannot ride the likes of Phantasmal Species such as Monstrous Beasts.

Sagramore could ride horses well, but he also had great misfortunes at jousting as well. What a bother.

— Personal Skills —

Protection of the Faeries: A+

-is a blessing from Elementals; the capacity to increase one's Luck in dangerous situations. Activation is limited to battlefields, where it is possible to perform feats of arms.

Sagramore was married to a fay, whose hand she won after beating Gawain in a duel for her hand. In battle it can be activated to apply a "+" modifier to her Luck parameter (this is where the plus on the parameter listed above actually applies). Unlike the blessing upon Lancelot, which is of a lower rank but more versatile, this one cannot be applied to other stats.

King of Men: A

-The status not of the "ideal king" who remains distant from all others, as King Arthur was, but of the "imperfect king that is ideal for mankind" that is able to understand the hearts of the people and gathers their hopes into themselves. A form of kingship possessed by Sagramore, surpassing her predecessor in this regard. A composite skill of Charisma and Instinct, that also allows the user to draw added power from the presence of allies around them. The more allies, the more power the user is able to receive as a result. (This does not drain others, merely uses their presence as a means to draw in more power for the user.)

Morte Jenue: B

-A phrase meaning "dead youth". A skill combining the instances of Sagramore's perceived weaknesses, both as someone who in life suffered "epileptic fits" as well as was terrible at jousting. Though in life he went on many adventures and even defeated Gawain in combat, on top of forming the second round table and preserving the glory of Arthurian Britain for a time longer, which makes his very nature "deceptively strong".

This skill causes Sagramore to be perceived by others as "weak", "frail", "easy prey", or even "not worth trying to fight", and all of his parameters appear one-rank lower than they actually are. It is similar to the Espionage skill, but in this case originates from aspects and feats from the user in life that rather than any kind of spying skills. It is a skill the causes other to underestimate the user, concealing their true strength.

— Armaments —

Round Table (sword/shield)

— Noble Phantasms —

(Again, follow the recommendations above for Original Servants. Keep in mind that Non-Riders are generally limited to one or two Noble Phantasms, while Riders generally have between three to five Noble Phantasms. Any number exceeding this will require good explanation)

Name: The Round Table

Title: “Glorious Home Of Knights, Raging Tide Against My Enemies”

Rank: A+

NP Type: Anti-Army (sword)/Barrier (shield)

Range: 1-75 (sword)/1-2 (shield)

Maximum Number of Targets: 700

Description: The Second Round Table, assembled from the original Round Table by Sagramore Constantine, both as an object and an organization to fight off the Saxons and retain the glory of Arthur’s Britain. It is weapon of King Arthur’s successor, who was a blood relative of Arthur to boot, which like the original Round Table can “act as a shield to protect Britain” as well as “become a sword to slay Britain’s enemies”.

For Sagramore, since the table is no longer empowered by the power of Excalibur, it is powered by her own warp spasm power. When infused with her warp spasm power, this Noble Phantasm takes on the empowered form of a gleaming red sword, which imitates the power of Excalibur and can fire off an accelerated light beam similar to (but not as strong as) the original Excalibur. Its beam, however, is a red light fueled by rage that strikes down all who try to stand before it. Though it pales to Excalibur, it is not a Noble Phantasm to underestimate. If used as a Broken Phantasm, it can ever so briefly match the power of “that holy sword” at the cost of its own destruction.

When Sagramore is utilizing the “Riastrad” Noble Phantasm, the warp spasm power within the table is instead transferred to her body instead. Due to this, during such a time this Noble Phantasm reverts into the form of a very large shield wielded by the user. In this form, however, the bulk of the shield can be both defensive as well as....used for battering enemies and ramming into them with immense force. Further, activating the shield in this form...whilst costly, allows Sagramore to deploy an A-rank variant of “Lord Camelot”. Yet along with being defensively strong, by first deploying this variant and charging at the enemy this shield becomes an even better ramming weapon.

However, when the Riastrad is turned “off” by Sagramore this shield reverts into a sword form once more.

Even if the round table is lost from her hands, Sagramore can always re-materialize it back into her hands without fail.

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Name: Riastrad

Title: “A Knight’s Warped Frenzy of Monstrous Rage, Inversion of One’s Humanity”

Rank: A

NP Type: Anti-Unit (Self)

Range: 0

Maximum Number of Targets: 1

Description: The knight known as Sagramore is a unique case among heroic spirit, sharing the same trait with the Irish hero Cu Chulainn: the warp spasm, aka the “riastrad”. A battle frenzy that transforms one into an incredibly powerful “monster”, inverting the human body and its parts into an abomination of twisted organs and mighty limbs, hair all sticking out like sharp spears of great sharpness, and incredible physical might. As much as this appears to be the form of a “monster” to the eyes of others, though, the user remains fundamentally human and doesn’t gain the status of a “monster”. This being said, their raw power and frenzy in this state is nothing short of “monstrous” on the battlefield and is capable of leveling armies, going beyond the scale of normal servant stats during this time.

In this state the user does remain in control of themselves, similar to the effects of the skill “berserk” putting the user in a similarly controllable rage. Utilizing this Noble Phantasm for Sagramore, at least, is like flipping a switch, turning it “on and off” at will.

However, its use leaves the servant physically drained and ravenously hungry, rather drained in the aftermath overall. This means its use in longer battles is, on top of the prana consumption that causes Sagramore’s post-use state, risky for Sagramore and their master...but can have immense rewards if used properly.

[Crusader Lord]

@Parallel Hearts Above this, i present my servant submission. :D

sorry i forgot to tag you

[Cu Chulainn]

OwO

[Pyromania99]

Alrighty, I think I have a completed servant.

Empress Regnant of Japan

Character Sheet

Class: Lancer
True Name: Empress Jingu
Origin: Japanese Historical Fact (According to Nihon Shoki though many speculate her to be a legend)
Height/Weight: 132 Centimeters tall, 47 Kilograms
Appearance:


Jingu looks much younger than one would expect even by the age of forty.

Alignment:Lawful-Neutral
Personality: Jingu’s personality is a mixture of when she was a Warrior Princess and when she was a 99 year old Empress. She tends to call anyone that looks younger than forty a “boy” or “girl” like an old woman yet keeps the aggressiveness of her youth. She starts with a handicap if she can as well, starting with her Katana to size up the opponent and switching to the Amenonuhoko as she needs. She tends to smirk when she’s having fun in combat.

Backstory:

Jingu was originally named Okinagatarashi-hime until she married Emperor Chuai and ascended to Empress Consort in the year 192. Prior to her marriage, however, she was both a maiden to Amaterasu where she learned to fight and then a renowned warrior princess from a branch family. She was known for her use of Bow, Sword but more so than either her mastery of the Naginata. Okinagatarashi-hime was a leader of war and fought, and fought. Bandits, opposing factions and whatever else. Supposedly, she had even fought evil creatures.

She become so reknown that she caught the eye of the main Imperial Family. At the age of twenty in the year 189, the Main Family tasked her with surveying an island that has been recently located. Miraculously, it had just appeared, but it had seemed that it was protected by some evil yokai that were hostile. Unworried that she could fell them, Okinagatarashi-hime agreed (not that one could turn down a request of the Imperial family) and left.

It took half a years travel as she had a number of complications along the way but had a smooth trip there as she rode the boat for two days to the destination. Despite the turbulant waves, they arrived safely. Okinagatarashi-hime and a small group of warriors departed the boat and walked forward. Soon, the had found what Yokai were there. Oni. For some reason, they were there. There were about three which in most situations were more than a match for her small band. Somehow, they managed to slay all of the Oni with not a casualty.

From there, further in, they found a great palace. A place for something amazing. An older soldier that had learned much from a priest had mentioned this must have been Onokoroshima, the first island created by the gods Izanami and Izanagi. Everyone else was skeptical at first, until they saw how glorious the Palace was. It was nothing that could be made by human hands.

Even more so, they found a couple of beautiful things inside. A pair of jewels and a jeweled spear. The same soldier looked dumbfounded and claimed that the spear must be Amenonuhoko. Curious, Okinagatarashi-hime approached and the three items glowed. Then, a voice flowed through the Palace whispering her name. She took that as a sign that it was meant for her to have. After acquiring the items, they left and investigated the island for a few more hours before it began to quake. They rushed back to the boat and as they boarded, the island disappeared under the water. The waters were tumultuous but were calmed after the twin jewels shone brightly.

They returned and the Main Family praised her for her success. The required her to house the Amenonuhoko in the Imperial Vault but bade her to keep the twin jewels as she deserved as such. Soon after, she married the soon to be Emperor Chuai. In 192, Chuai ascended to the throne. His reign was mostly peaceful with a number of small conflicts that were easily quashed.

One day, in the year 200, she was possessed by the gods and through her, they told Chuai that they promised of rich lands oversea. With a look out to sea, he saw nothing and was suspicious. He denounced his belief of the promise of these “gods” and this angered them. They cursed him and declared that he would die and any promise of wealth and land would instead go to his unborn son.

Jingu came out of her trance soon after, worried as she remembered all that had occured. Chuai waved off her fears as he didn’t believe in the “gods.” Not even a month later, he died of mysterious circumstances. As most of the court had heard of the incident, they all believed it was the will of the gods. As such, with no heir as of current, Jingu took over rule as Regent. Her first real act, was to go to the promised land as the gods had said, though she felt more like she was compelled to do so than wanted. She took the Amenonuhoko for her use and went with her army to claim the promised land, Korea.

They reached the mainland quickly enough as her twin jewels controlled the tides and waves and made a beach head. Three years had passed and they had conquered the land that was promised to them, they made peaceful occupations as they could. What they had found, however, was that the land was not quite as rich as they were promised. The soil was great, but it would not be rewarding to continue. They gathered what riches they could and took their dead with them.

In legend, it was said that her child stayed unborn for three years for her to complete her conquest, but in truth, the child was born on the soil of the promised land. She took him back with them of course, and raised him while controlling the Empire. She held this role as a respected leader and general until her death in the year of 269 where her son was finally crowned Emperor after 68 years.

— Parameters —
STR: B | END: C- | AGI:A+ | MAG: D- | LCK: B | NP: A

— Class Skills —

Magic Resistance B: Cancel spells of B-Rank or below, no matter what High-Thaumaturgy it is.

— Personal Skills —

Imperial Privilege C: Jingu, acting regent for over 50 years has, despite not considered a traditional Emperor herself, has the same authority. For her, the corresponding skills are swordsmanship, archery, Charisma, military tactics and a couple of others.

Blessing of Amaterasu A: As both a member of the Imperial Family and a once priestess to the shrine of Amaterasu, Jingu was considered especially blessed by Amaterasu in accordance with her achievements. When activated, she gains strength and reinvigorates her, drawing in mana to restore her energy reserves doing even more so if she’s in the sunlight.

Calm Sea, Calm Mind B: Much like the sea when she is around, Jingu is able to calm her nerves in tense situations and centers herself. Clearing her mind for a duration and allowing her resist mind altering effects. In addition, it sharpens her senses and allows her to process information and make decisions more rapidly.

— Armaments —
Jingu carries a katana as well and uses that as a “primary” arm to make others believe her as a Saber, rather than a lancer.

She also has her armor but that is nothing special.

— Noble Phantasms —

Amenonuhoko

Heavenly Jeweled Spear - Amenonuhoko
Rank: A+
Type: Anti-Unit/(Anti-Army)

Amenonuhoko, the naginata that created the first island, Onokoroshima by the hands of Izanagi and Izanami. Housed there until it was found. It is a powerful weapon, that can disguise itself as a piece of the most pristine Jade one has seen.

The naginata by looks alone is beautiful. The shaft is intricately decorated and designed but grip-wise feels like it glues to the hands but only when one wants it to. Towards the end of the shaft at the blade, 4 jewels are socketed. A sapphire, ruby, emerald and topaz. The blade itself looks to be a sort of divine metal that looks like silver but is tougher than steel and unable to be broken. Near to the shaft, there are two slots that seems like it can fit two jewels.

If the Twin Tide Jewels of Ryujin are inserted into these two slots, it empowers the Amenonuhoko. It gains the ability to project forth blades of water.

In addition, like in the origin story of the first island, Onokoroshima, the Amenonuhoko can create land from a drop of salt water.

Twin Tide Jewels of Ryujin

Twin Jewels of Ryujin
Rank: B+
Type: Anti-City
Range:

The Twin Tide Jewels of Ryujin are two jewels that look to be like a ruby and a sapphire used to control the tides. Jingu in particular, used them to cross the sea between Japan and Korea. It was also powerful enough to cause floods and other hazardous water conditions. They also have the ability to store water and carry a large amount in them, enough so to cause a tidal wave and flood a city.

When used by Jingu, the water can torrent out of the jewels and Jingu can directed them as she wants. If enough water is nearby, she can cause a violent flood which is more than enough to ruin a normal city.

[Player 2]

@Player 2

I'm sorry but I'll have to ask you to rewrite that Asterios' CS from the beginning. While I understand that Servants that are featured exclusively on Fate/Grand Order can feel rather incomplete sometimes (lacking some base consistency and trait that Servants from other works in the Franchise would normally have, not to say anything of over-inflated skill ranks just for mechanical gameplay purposes), this CS lacks some basic understanding of how Asterios has been portrayed as a character through the whole of his appearances in the story/events.

I'm just asking that, if you are making him in the same class and all that, you keep him a little closer to his canon portrayal.

@Parallel Hearts

Asterios explicitly ate people and was a near-feral creature for all of his life right up until before Theseus clobbered him, and Lostbelt 1 even makes reference to how the Asterios summoned is, in essence, a softer version of the Minotaur, while Minotauros is explicitly not that and is in fact driven by a childish and sadistic hunger. This is in line with the Minotauros seen in LB1, which is a canon portrayal and not even a Lostbelt exclusive one at that. It is a simple matter of which name he is summoned under, and what the conditions are which otherwise allow for one name to be summoned over the other. Within the Moon Cell, it is safe to assume that the Minotauros is as legitimate a Saint Graph as Asterios.

for example

Kotomine:

The one from the Pan-Human History seems to be quite a peaceful existence. But when it comes to this one here, he can be summoned with the name that was thrown away.
His True Name is Minotauros. A monster that eats people in the Labyrinth.
By the way, did you think more than half of the Rebel Army survived due to the small number of corpses?
The amount that was captured by us is 20% at best. The large majority of the remaining ones were eaten by him.
Being a glutton is convenient at such times. The rotting corpses won’t produce flies.
The flies in this Lostbelt are ferocious.
Just to survive in this land of extreme cold, they will devour all meat they see by any means necessary.

Minotauros:

BOUNDLESS “DEATH”. ENDLESS “DEATH”.
KILL. WANT TO KIIIIAAAAAAAALLL!

AAH―――LIKE I THOUGHT―――
...I’M FULL. I’LL LEAVE YOU FOR TOMORROW.

NOT YET, NOT YET, NOT YET! I HAVE NOT EATEN ANYTHING YET!
I, I, I---!

WHAT WAS, WHAT WAS, THAT MEMORY---?
----HAHAHA. WHAT WAS THAT. WHAT WAS THAT, WHAT WAS THAT!
I HAVE NOT ONCE BEEN LOOKED AT LIKE THAT--- I AM JEALOUS OF THAT OTHER ME…

Mash:

Yes, Master. ...He is not Asterios-san, is he?
He is not an easygoing person with a kind smile.

Holmes:

As far as I can observe, the Minotauros has no intellect to speak of.
…Asterios, on the other hand, would have reason and such a plan would not work, but----

[Parallel Hearts]

@Crusader Lord

While most of your character's idea is alright, there are a few important details that need to be addressed.

- While it's not very important (since Arthur had a ton of knights serving "him" on Camelot, anyway), the Original Round Table only had 13 members: King Arthur, Percival, Kay, Gaheris, Palamedes, Tristan, Gawain, Lancelot, Bedivere, Mordred, Galahad, Agravain, Gareth. So, she probably isn't right in considering herself one of them. You can do it, just know that's likely something that would be considered highly dishonored by most knights who know the truth.

Now, for the important bits:

- King of Men is an exaggerated skill if it allows for both instinct and Charisma at the equivalent of a Rank A. If both are at B Rank or lower, then it's acceptable.

- A Shielder shouldn't have a Saber level offensive NP like that Sword. It kinda defeats the point of the class system if you have both. You can either make her a Saber and keep the word, or a Shielder and keep the shield, but the other part that isn't being used will have to be sealed.

@Pyromania99
Shuten-sized Empress is alright. I hope you don't worry if I imagine her dialogue in Aoi Yuki's voice.

@Player 2
I see. I knew he ate people before because well... there wasn't anything else he could feed on. Anyway, I don't follow Japan's FGO so that's rather new for me, but I suppose it's ok.

The only thing I'll ask for is to change that last NP. The idea behind it isn't bad but being able to ignore both the disadvantages of being a Beast and of being Divine is a bit disappointing from a storytelling PoV. It's not exactly that strong (since there are few things that really target these weak spots) but it's underwhelming narratively speaking. He keeping both advantages is ok, but (just like the Gorgon) he should keep both weak spots as well.