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@Duoya - I can't see any reason why they couldn't. Prayers don't really offer gods anything outside of the reverence and adoration of humans but if your gods want to there's nothing stopping that.

@Legion02 - You're quite welcome to. I had largely designed the humans from the first post to be played with as toys of the gods.

@Lmpkio - No problem. Going solely by what I've put at the front I can understand there being some hiccups when using an unconventional layout for your god. I'll always be happy to discuss ideas and solutions to clear up confusion on a general basis.

As a small reminder for everyone I would recommend discussing the use of characters, mortal or otherwise, that belong to other writers before going ahead on a post. There's been no issues thus far but I simply wish to quell any potential for issues in the posts to come.

Overall I'm quite keen to see what everyone has in store. Happy posting!
@Rune_Alchemist - That's all cool. Gotta love slimes.
I'd just like to announce that the first post is officially up. The IC tab is officially open to our lovely roster of gods and goddesses. For tonight's entertainment we have human slaughter with a side of minor miracles!

It's currently nine in the morning and I haven't slept yet. I'll leave you all to read over what I've put so you can begin plotting your first posts now that this rp has officially begun.

For those still looking to submit new gods you are still welcome to. Early on it'll be no problem writing in old gods and later on I can provide opportunities for new ones to join.

For the time being though... Yaaay! And goodnight.
Peace, something so many desire yet so few can appreciate.

A calm wind drifted across the frozen shore of North Crown. South of Verzak sand swept idly along the great dunes. Along the borders of the four great isles the waves gently caressed the shores to the sway of the celestial bodies overhead. The land was pleasantly warm from the sun's golden rays, the vast swaths of vegetation greedily reaching out to claim sustenance from it's very touch. Left alone it very well seemed like the land was truly in a peace of it's own. It could only last so long as, with the setting of the sun, the plots of man and god alike were set into motion.

As the final rays receded beneath the horizon, the sun on it's way to bring day to the other side of this pleasantly green and blue orb, a different sort of light made it's way through the forest. The light of torches weaved between the trees, primitive men and women clad in furs running forth wielding these burning tools along with spears and stone studded clubs in their grasp. Leading these warriors was a man who stood tall above the rest, wearing the skull of a large lizard upon his own head. Protecting his shoulders were pauldrons fashioned from a creature's rib cage, lit torches fixed to them which allowed him to wear the flames in a manner of speaking. The rest all wore headgear wrought from the skulls of various beasts and even other humans but it was clear from the size and impressiveness of his attire that the tall man was their leader.

Meanwhile down the ways were another tribe's village. In the middle of their ring of tents which were largely just long branches tied at the top and covered with hide was a quaint campfire surrounded with celebrating villagers. They had great success with a recent hunt bringing much meat, many gathered berries and varied herbs. As they celebrated with dancing and festivity they cooked the flesh of the deer they had slain. Just before they could begin the great feast however some of them caught sight of the lights approaching them. They stopped and looked on, unaware that the approaching lights were the fires of battle swiftly approaching.

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A woman's scream cut through the air as a spear was hurled forth from the clearing between trees, lodging itself deep within a man's abdomen. Swiftly their hunters rushed for their weapons but the invaders were upon them well before they were ready to fight back. A brutal massacre ensued as the warriors mauled the men who had yet to arm themselves before turning to face the small few who emerged from their tents, spears now in hand. The leader of the warriors faced down the head of the village. The tall man with the burning pauldrons wielded a large ceremonial wooden staff topped with a clay brazier which housed a particularly strong flame within it. In his other hand he wielded a large stone tied with dried sinew to a short piece of wood which served as the handle to his primitive hammer.

Across from him the head of the village was little more than an old man who was quite a bit smaller framed than the warrior's leader, wielding a paltry stone knife which was used far more for cutting meat from slain animals and far less for battling fire laden chieftains. Seeing the disparity between himself and his attacker the head of the village dropped his knife before dropping to his knees, looking up to the tall man with tears in his eyes.

"Please spare us! You've won, let us leave with our lives!" The old man begged, silently praying to Hayim for the safety of him and his tribe whilst the tall man sneered down at him. The old man's pleas were met with deep, thunderous laughter from the tall man. Rather than answer the head who groveled before him he kicked the man down, pinning him to the earth with his foot as he stared down with cruel delight. Tipping his staff forward a strange liquid coated in fire poured from the edge of the brazier, flowing down upon the village head's face. The old man screamed in agony, thrashing helplessly but only succeeding in helping the burning fluids splash across his face, covering his entire head in fire. The fire clad leader breathed the smoke in deeply, taking in the smell of the strange alchemy mingling with the scent of burning flesh. It smelled kind of like bacon which put a sickening grin upon his chiseled face.

The tents were all put to the flame. With all resistance slain the warriors held aloft their torches and cheered in victory. With a loud clearing of his throat the leader quelled the cheers to silence as all attention was on him.

"The hands will remain with me to secure the food and women we've already captured." He gestured to his greatest warriors, men and women who were painted with a hand print above their heart which was made with a bright red dye. "As for the rest of you, go forth into the woods! Kill the men, capture the women, let none escape our fire's wrath!" His voice boomed as he proclaimed his orders. Those who weren't staying with him to secure their prizes set forth into the woods, cheering and howling with torches and weapons in hand as they chased after those who had fled.

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Through the woods fled a girl clad in a simple brown dress. Tears flushed her large chestnut colored eyes as everything she had ever known was destroyed in a blaze of fire brought upon by the savage tribe from the south. Behind her she could hear her pursuer, a large man who's heavy feet beat the forest floor loudly as he hooted and hollered in his chase. Her chest and lungs hurt as she pushed herself to her utmost capacity to run as fast as she could lest she be killed or worse by these murderous fiends. Thorned bushes and branches clawed across her as the forced her way through, her skin accruing minor cuts while her dress sustained several small rips and holes.

Taking her first glance behind her, the brutish thug still keeping up with her despite her best efforts, she had failed to see the short yet sudden drop ahead. As her foot gave way she exclaimed with a short sharp note of surprise as she fell, tumbling down the dirt cliff side. After a short tumble she came to a swift stop, skidding down the along her side until she hit the very bottom. She shot up, heart racing a mile a minute as her eyes were drawn up to the approaching light of the torch's flame. Quickly looking left and right her panic was screaming at her to make a decision. She could of ran but her body ached from pain and effort. Having seen the man in pursuit of her she wasn't sure he'd grown anywhere nearly as fatigued as her over this race of theirs.

She saw a recess in the face of the small cliff. While she risked discovery and capture by remaining she had little faith in her ability to outrun the man and thus chose to hide then and there. Tucking herself in the narrow recess within the short dirt wall she could hear the heavy slapping of the warrior's thick feet less than an arm's length above her. The sound of his movement stopped quite suddenly as he stood still at the edge of the little rise. From his position he couldn't see where she had went even though just moments ago he was just about to close the distance between them to where he could grab her.

Her breath was held tight. She was too afraid to make any noise whatsoever given how close the man was to her hiding spot. As the man stood still, not uttering a word, the silence the woods around her was positively deafening. All of a sudden there was a great thud which shattered the stillness of the air. She was able to feel the tremors of his landing as he had jumped down from the top of the little cliff and landed like a god had simply dropped a human statue there. Her chest was tight, her whole body wound like tightly woven fibers as she peeked from the edge of the dirt crevice. The man's torch illuminated the area around him, the light scraping right along the edge of her hiding spot.

"Come out come out little girly! We only want to plaaay~" The man taunted as his eyes continued to scan across the forest ahead of him for any traces of her. His rotten words sickened her to her very core and if it weren't for the very real terror which gripped her heart right then she would of felt nothing but hate more searing than the very torches they brandish. The moment she saw the whites of his eyes she immediately ducked back into her hiding spot. Her back was up against the wall so hard she left an impression of herself in the dirt it consisted of.

It was too late however. He had seen the faint shadow of movement out from the corner of his eye. She could not see him but she could hear him crushing grass and other flora underfoot as he approached her hiding place. She had never known fear so real as it was right then. Right before the very moment his torch's light crested past the edge of the small recess she suddenly felt a hand wrap around her face, smothering her mouth so no sound could escape. This sudden grasp shocked her, causing her to let out a muffled scream. In that very instant nearly a hundred more hands emerged from the darkness, grabbing every part of her to the point of holding her perfectly immobile. The world rushed around her as she felt herself pulled through the wall which was very much solid less than a second ago.

The bulky warrior stepped forward, looking into the cleft in the cliff having heard the stifled cry only to be faced with a perfectly unoccupied space, not a girl in sight. Not entirely sure if he wasn't just hearing things he decided to set his sights back on the woods ahead. He was disgruntled with having lost sight of the girl despite being so very close to his prey so he continued to sweep the area until he was certain she was gone.

She was most definitely gone.

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Pulled into the dark unknown she struggled in vain as she was whisked away, hands passing her to other hands which served to funnel her down what felt like one long chute lined on all sides with smooth wispy hands which served to slow and control her descent. She screamed into the seemingly infinite blackness, a darkness so deep that not even echoes returned.

All of a sudden she felt a natural breeze upon her skin once more, not the touch of countless fingers that once carried her. She sat up, the feeling of grass against her legs and palms. Gazing out from the shadow she was sat in she could see a new forest bathed in silvery moonlight. No longer could she hear the crackling of distant fires nor the din of warriors sacking her home. The air was alive with the sounds of crickets chirping their nightly chorus.

Still in shock from this sudden development she pushed herself up to her feet and looked around in a thorough examination of the environment in the hopes of figuring out where she was. It took some time but after some thinking the facts clicked into place. She was on the early climb of a mountainside. Her mother had explained to her before that their village would trade with the people of the caverns, exchanging furs and meat for stone tools and flint for starting fires. She shuddered at even the thought of fire now though.

Deciding on a way to go she noticed something else. Sat next to where she was placed down was a big leaf, far bigger than any she had ever seen. It appeared to contain something seeing as it was tied up at the ends with vine fibers. Looking inside she saw various fruits safely stored within. She had never seen such fruits before, they were much larger and more interesting than any of the vegetables she had seen growing in her native forest. She wondered what they tasted like.

Looking around she could see nowhere this leaf or it's contents could have fallen from. There were no traces of anyone nearby and no explanation for anything that just happened.

"There's only one explanation for this..." She paused, the conclusion dawning on her. "Our god, Hayim, must have protected me!" It was all clear now. She was whisked away through the power of the forest and provided food for the trip ahead of her now that her home was destroyed. Tying the leaf back up to keep the food secure she scooped it up before looking out into the night sky with all it's marvelous stars.

"When I get to the village of the cavern people I should prepare an offering of flowers for him in thanks for his great kindness!"

With that said she set began her long trek up the mountain, singing her people's songs of praise to him as she went.



Meanwhile in Oao's Den of Darkness...



There was a visceral shlpop noise. The goddess Oao had been ensconced within a slick fleshy mould of darkness, casting her senses through it so she might see the world through her domain. The gross onomatopoeia was the result of her pulling herself free from the soft slippery folds of the strange organ of darkness she had designed to hold her in comfort whilst she was busy casting her mind forth.

"Why..." Her voice was a gentle whisper, something so faint and soft it wouldn't even frighten a mouse. She stepped back upon the cavern floor which was entirely lined with a strange slick yet rubbery surface formed from darkness which was cool from the cold which seeped from the very walls of these caverns.

"Why does no one like meEe!?" She wailed in grief as she dropped to her bony little knees in defeat, covering her face with her great long fingers as she felt tears welling up in her deep dark eyes. She shook as a deep sob shuddered up from her chest.

"I... I saved her from capture, placed her somewhere safe and even gave her food to survive the trip... A... And then she thanks Hayim!?" Clear wet tears ran freely down her shallow cheeks, dripping from her chin as she wept. Too consumed with this sorrow to even bother standing she let herself fall to her side, pulling her knees to her chest as she curled up in the fetal position and continued to cry.

"Everyone h-" sniffle "hates me. They stay under the sun and light fires to keep me away. No matter how I try to protect them nothing will ever like me, not even beasts. They just use me, bringing harm to others by hiding in me. They say I shelter predators but it's not my fault! I'm the victim here, I'm not to blame! I'm not. I'm not..." Clearly having succumbed to her deep depression she simply lays there for some unknowable length of time. As she rests phantasmal shadows start to emerge from the pitch black walls. They begin to form a mild resemblance to the shapes of the other gods and goddesses of the world.

"Look at her. What a pathetic little wretch..." Hissed the shadow of Anu'Varr.

"Such a lowly thing. Almost makes me not interested in peeling it open and shining a light on it's insides. Almost!" Raved the shadow of Iva'Krorh.

"I would devour you but I cannot fathom what revolting taste you would leave in my mouth." Growled the shadow of Naswaru.

"I would be lying if I said she was even worth thinking about. Who am I talking about again?" Snickered the shadow of Iarus.

"You speak truth at last Iarus. Let us banish this filth from memory and perhaps history altogether." Declared the shadow of Dao Rugadh.

"Grrr! I'll burn her to a crisp! Fire time!" Roared the shadow of Ragnagedon.

"Even my underworld's too good for you. Perhaps you belong in the void." Cursed the shadow of Azhriel.

"With you out of the way I'll have a new place to store my vast collection of shiny things!" Cheered the shadow of Ral.

"Back off Ral! I've had my eyes on those caves first!" Argued the shadow of Dirka.

"There's no place in this earth for scum like Oao. Let me strike her out!" Proclaimed the shadow of Ferron.

"Hayim's gonna defecate in your carcass." Giggled the shadow of Hayim.

All of their shadows continued to cast their scorn and hatred upon Oao, slowly circling her as they did. When they spoke they spoke not with the voices of those they depicted but with Oao's own voice. She was the one saying all these things to her. Oao recited their hateful words back at herself, able to multiply her voice so multiple shadows could speak at once but not enough to change the voices. In the end the only person speaking here was her.

"Stop! Please! I beg you. It's not my fault! I never hurt anyone! I never asked for this! Just please... Please..."

Just as the negativity was beginning to overwhelm her the voice were suddenly cut silent as a hand broke through the group, reaching down to her. She looked up only to see large, faceless being formed from darkness. Kneeling down it offered it's tough but tender hand to her. Placing her hand in it's own it carefully lifted her from the cold black floor and into it's loving. Angling into a sitting position it rested her in it's lap, cradling her with it's strong and muscular arms. Letting her tension ease away she cooed softly as it gently stroked her long luscious hair. Letting her hands sit in her lap she gently closed her eyes and breathed in deeply, slowly letting the air escape as she exhaled. Slowly regulating her breathing she slowly eased her tension, the depressive shakes calming to a mild tremble in the fingertips. New shadows emerged from the dark, replacing the cruel facsimiles of the gods and goddesses with faceless human figures.

"Oao, do you want to be our friend?"

"The darkness is a wonderful thing! We should all be more like she is!"

"You do not need to change for us Oao. You are perfect just the way you are!"

"We care for you Oao. We'll never let light touch you, we swear!"

"If it weren't for you I'd be dead. Thank you Oao!"

"Your hair is wonderful but we'd never betray your trust and look, I promise."

"You do so much for Tabrasa! You're amazing!"

"Who needs the light anyway? The darkness can provide everything we need!"

"I love you Oao."

The voices issued compliment after compliment, surrounding her with positive support. In her mind she let herself envision a world where these things were true. A world where a kind, strong lover would be there to support her. A world where people would respect her and thank her for her help. A world where the darkness no longer feared the light. A world where she would no longer have to be afraid. A perfect world. But a perfect world didn't exist. This wasn't that world and deep down she knew it well. Still, for now the only thing she truly wanted was to simply close her eyes and believe the lies she told herself. It was a world she wanted to pretend she lived in.

She could only pretend she was happy.



Relevant to - @Duoya@Legion02
Shoutout to - @Lord Zee@Leotamer@Rune_Alchemist@Dealdric@Archangel89@thewizardguy@Kalas@jetipster@ReusableSword@Vega7@Noodles
@Stern Algorithm@Noodles - After reviewing both your characters I am happy to say that they are confirmed for submission. You may feel free to post them up on the characters tab.

@Noodles - One thing I will note is that while having his creations be imbued with power to keep them from being destroyed by most beings is fine as time goes on such power will start to fade over the ages. Without upkeep there will come a day when his magical treasures will lose their power and return to simply being interesting trinkets. Naturally the more powerful an item is the slower it is to lose it's strength but it is also more difficult to create. Your god may find himself quite exhausted if he continually produces treasures of similar power to those listed in his current creations list without rest.

@Lmpkio - If the CS I read back on page four is still the correct one then from what I've read your character is confirmed for submission. You may feel free to post all three of him up on the characters tab. As for your request to make another god if you feel up to handling two then you are quite free to submit another CS for me to review.

In more general news I'm about halfway through the opening post. I may or may not get it done today but I can probably guarantee it will be done tomorrow at the latest. It'll involve human on human violence as well as a small slice of Oao's daily life.

Edit: Missed a couple posts between starting this one and submitting it. Whoops!

@Legion02 - My idea was that someone within a tribe of humans would have seen Ragnagedon once and, inspired by his sheer might, decided to mold the tribe around use of fire. He would go on to become leader of this tribe and use fire to subjugate neighboring tribes, destroying their homes and killing their people before setting it all ablaze to try and earn Ragnagedon's favor while using his example to strike fear into their enemy's hearts.

@Lmpkio - If you wanted an idea for what could have resulted in Drakarios splitting into three one such idea is that what he actually devoured back when he was a normal dragon was a newly born Divine Cord attuned to weather. He could of eaten it before it shaped a body around itself and just like any mortal being who absorbs a Divine Cord he'd of been subjected to radical changes which can include but are not limited to changes in personality and the development of new body features. Growing three heads that can separate into three separate bodies, two of which are divine constructs powered by the main body, is an entirely feasible change that Divine Cords can bring upon something.
@Rune_Alchemist - You'll have to find out. I will only confirm or deny knowledge regarding the Divine Cords that exist among the gods. What's unknown will need to be made known.
@Rune_Alchemist - It's quite alright. I'm good with the idea you're going for. He may end up arm-wrestling Somler for ownership of lost or forgotten places.

@thewizardguy - Either tonight or tomorrow. I'm working on the intro even now.
@thewizardguy - Having a large number of entrances is certainly acceptable. Having many entrances has it's advantages and disadvantages. One such disadvantage is that if he wants the entrances enchanted with divine magic in a particular manner it'll take a bit of effort to enchant a whole bunch of them. If he doesn't want the magic to weaken with the passage of time either he'll need to maintain them too which can also take a fair bit of effort. Just like mortals gods can grow tired from exertion, even if they are capable of far greater feats than any mortal. For example an earth god could use his power to split the main continent in two but afterwards he'd need to take a god nap before he'd be back to his old self. Ultimately the consequences for exertion are small but when other gods are involved even a small disadvantage can be an opening others can take advantage of.

@Rune_Alchemist - If I'm correct it's basically a combination of a portal and a scanning spell, yes? If so then it's quite fine but do bear in mind that since Iva'Krorh is the god of knowledge and not the god of portals or transportation it'll be far harder for him to move things than it would be to scan them. If a god wanted to protect something or someone from being abducted in this manner there are a number of domains which if used correctly would allow them to supercede this power, especially if they were intervening directly.

You're free to add that but as a possible suggestion scanning things directly can also fall within his domain if you wish.

@Lmpkio - Excellent. Do let me know when those changes are applied to the CS and I'll give it another look-over.

@Dealdric - That is quite fine. I'll give the details a read when I get the opportunity.

@Legion02 - Just a quick proposal: How would you feel in regards to having a small tribe of humans revere Ragnagedon?
@Lmpkio - There are a few details I wish to discuss before I can accept Drakarios. Firstly, the matter of the three dragons becoming one. One detail of Divine Cords is that they cannot be divided amongst multiple beings. Basically either one of the dragons had the cord and the others were divine creations of the main dragon or they are three gods rolled into one which creates a problem. If all of them had such cords before combining this would essentially mean the sum three of them would end up fused together forming three Divine Cords woven together, essentially allowing this god to hold three domains all at once right away even though all new gods are strictly limited to one. Now, while this theoretically is okay since I'll be allowing everyone to make as many gods as they're okay to handle having a single god that is really three gods right off the bat doesn't sit well with me. Perhaps if you were to hold off on having the two other dragon gods appear until after a couple rounds of posting and then have the meeting of the three take place in the actual rp as opposed to the biography section it would be much less problematic. On the other hand if you wish to go the route of having the other two be divine creations of Drakarios, essentially parts of his body that can split off from him but hold no Divine Cords of their own, then that's quite acceptable.

My second concern is with a segment in Drakarios's biography. I don't like having "Unnamed" gods and goddesses that aren't direct creations of yourself appearing in your god's past to make declarations. Unless you plan on making these unspecified deities yourself I'd consult with other players with existing gods to see if they'd like to have that be something they did. I'm not going to play host to any gods or goddesses that aren't my direct creations as NPC's since all gods and goddesses present in this rp hold a great deal of importance in the scope of matters. There are no nondescript deities, thus, that scene cannot have taken place. Tying back to my first problem with this god this wouldn't be a problem if the meeting took place in the rp itself since the existing gods could involve themselves however little or however much as they feel like, removing the whole problem of NPC gods entirely since there would be none present.

Lastly I think having the ice head govern all aspects of winter might be of issue since Sveiand holds total regency over the cold. While things such blizzards and snow storms as a lesser domain are quite acceptable I think Sveiand would probably still hold final say on matters of all things cold. Also Ragnagedan is the same for fire but things like tornadoes and desert droughts are less his thing so it's a bit better for the fire dragon. If the fire and ice dragons were simply divine constructs born from the main dragon this wouldn't be a problem either since neither of them could overrule the respective gods anyways.

Overall I'd be happy to discuss alternative solutions to these problems. As it stands though your character's acceptance will need to wait for the time being.

@Stern Algorithm - I quite like this character conceptually, a somewhat more villainous god who's main aim is to establish order through whatever means necessary. There are hidden ramifications to him choosing the domain of Order that tie into the history of the world before the gods came to be which may become evident later on in the rp. Things like the laws of physics and the rules which govern the placement of sub-space doors were set long ago which largely leaves your god with regency over establishing order within mankind.

Still, if you want to take up the mantle of the God of Order you're welcome to make him. One thing is that I cannot wholly guarantee that the domains you've asked for will show up since, due to matters pertaining to the nature of Divine Cords, what cords appear for which domains are more or less random. After all there are currently no gods of the ocean, no gods of the sun or the moon nor of the earth itself. What gods appeared for which domains were largely decided at random and such is how new ones appear; Randomly.

For a more OOC reason for this while I support people growing their gods and their domains if one starts getting multiple domains then everyone else will want more to their own which essentially starts everyone down the road of a divine arms race. Early on especially I'll be pretty tight-fisted in regards to handing out extra domains since each time something like that occurs there is bound to be strife within the divine community. I pull too many extra domains out of my hat and there'll be too much strife, wars might very well break out and the amount of power put in the lucky opportunist's hands would likely create devastation across the land. As I said, it's a bit much for a world so young, especially when the divine have so many other matters to quarrel over as it is.

Alas you are welcome to make your god for me to review. How the other gods mentioned interact with him is almost entirely up to the respective players so I have no real say on that matter.
@Lmpkio - Actually it's more the opposite. The world was calm and everything was as it should be. There were great forest and oceans, birds occupied the skies, fish occupied the waters and both insects and beasts of great variety roamed the lands. All the while the sun and moon calmly danced across the skies as they should.

In truth the time between the origin of the gods and the point at which the rp takes place isn't very long. The gods of the world appeared at the same time as humanity was born. As humanity went about they created new domains which gave rise to the gods of man. After all that came the newest gods and that is basically where this is starting.

The opening posts are largely meant to give everyone's gods a chance to meet, interact and play with humans as they will. Once all that is set there will likely be a time skip giving everyone a chance to discuss and show how the actions of the gods changed the societies of man which bleeds into the stage where they start forming small cities and gathering groups of tribes under their banners to form the first armies the world will know. Or whatever other wackiness occurs, it's impossible to tell what might happen when gods are at play which is part of the fun.
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