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8 days ago
Current Those times in every writer's life, when they read over something they'd written in time's past and go: "What was I *saying*?!"
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9 days ago
Anyone else who uses Wix: If you ever duplicate a post then start editing the copy but don't finish, make sure you publish it *before* reverting to draft. Don't let what happened to me, happen to you.
1 mo ago
It can be so painfully frustrating how much my reach exceeds my grasp.
2 mos ago
Late night mutant Monday for ya' folks -- roleplayerguild.com/topics/… -- New Parts Releasing Soon!
3 mos ago
And then there are those times when it SUDDENLY HITS YOU. A MAJOR FLAW in the logic of a detail in your story. You don't know how it didn't jump out at you before, and you sorely wish it had.🤦‍♀️🔧
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It all never happened ~ but in your mind!
It all never happened ~ but in your mind!

Aspiring Screenwriter. Imagination whiz jumping between many 🌎s.
Self-taught Pic/🎶 Editor, VFX Coordinator & Mixer.
Independent student of 🎞; ever learning.


'The Reality Is: X-Men woke something up in me.
'The Reality Is: X-Men woke something up in me.

The Reality Is: It's getting me through.'
The Reality Is: It's getting me through.'


The comic book world is such a rich sandbox! Perhaps none richer than the X-Men -mutations to mix, slice-of-life elements to turn into anything but ordinary -the lines are drawn but the colours exceed them ~care to embark on the eXploration with me?

*cue 🎶X-Men Animated Series theme🎼swelling into Fox Movies theme🎵*




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DeoXys: A next gen X-Men/Comic Superhero RP

Cache of other X-Men concepts.









X-Men Envisionings: one passionate fan's riff on the FOX X-Men franchise.
Call it a fanfiction, call it what you will, but don't miss out!!


Part 2 of 2nd Edition Now Released!
Part 3 of 2nd Edition Now Released!

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Back and better than ever!
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Consider becoming an X-Envisioner yourself:
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The X-Men continues to be this excellent odyssey
The X-Men continues to be this excellent odyssey

Where ever it takes me.
Where ever it takes me.


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@Calle My vote's for 10 Steps.

It comes off simple yet engaging, and I appreciate the ominous surprise at the end.
@Falling The look is really cool.
"Vexgrowl" is compelling, but it sounds a little like what it is: two words next to each other.
Maybe just a slight adjust to "Vexowl" or if you don't like that look, "Vexhowl".

But "Vexgrowl" is actually growing on me.

Fresh off the press: Part 4 of Vol. 1 a.k.a. "Relativity": telkjplang.wixsite.com/xmenenvisionin…
You won't want to miss the revelations going forward -- things are about to get intense!
I enjoy fresh tomatoes, any kind on pizza, ketchup, tomato sauce, and salsa.
But I dislike canned tomatoes, tomato soup, tomato juice, and "day-after" tomatoes (leftover fresh slices stored in the fridge for another day).

Master Effex furrowed his brow at the knowledge they weren't a psychic - his brows raised soon after as he briefly found himself staring at, well, himself.

But it was more the way the shifting took place...He was positive he had never seen this individual before, but their shifting was familiar..though not highly. Perhaps he had caught a glimpse at some other time, like on the street out of the corner of his eye - who could say for sure with shifters.

Master Effex's mind was brought back to how they could partially see him, but then they caught his attention with a question. "No," he answered, "what's there to be afraid of." It was a statement not a question. His attention was on their reaction - not to him, but something seemed to strike them at their own words.

A new curiosity was just forming in his mind, when it was interrupted by them excusing themselves for crashing his place.

Master Effex considered..then answered: "I mean..it's alright. It's not really mine," he sort of gestured towards all the junk. True, he had made a little living space for himself with a makeshift bed, he had a lamp, a few provisions in an instrument case. But it wasn't like he owned the place. "And it's not exactly close quarters," he added. It was cluttered, but a comfortable size of space if one could look past that.

"Where did you stay last night?" he asked, more to gain information on this person than to be conversational. He felt he was going against his instincts in behaving as though suspicious, but, he wasn't assured he could trust his own instincts. Maybe they were still wrapped up in the world of his memories.

Obviously with somebody else playing Xavier and contributing to the idea, the details will differ - that's what I'm here for: not looking to write this myself. This is just my lone interpretation of a climax scene we'll be building towards:


Back at the facility, in a room not unlike a prison visiting area, Cyclops and Xavier are in the heat of battle against [Xavier's son].

Presently, Xavier has been knocked from his wheelchair while a ways beside him, Cyclops is picking himself up from a knock of his own - the room thoroughly wrecked with its tables and chairs broken and strewn.

[Xavier's son] is ramping up - intent on destroying his father and the one his father actually cared about.

Xavier (emotionally, painfully, worked up): "You asked for my guidance, Scott, as you approach fatherhood. SEE the kind of father I am and know NOW to LOOK ELSEWHERE!"

But Cyclops stares steadily at Xavier - until [Xavier's son's] movements shift his attention.

To this point, Cyclops' optic blasts have been virtually ineffective against [Xavier's son]; absorbed or deflected. He's been too quick in noticing the blasts coming for Cyclops to get one off impactfully beyond the first, which he hadn't had dialed up to full; unwilling to go that far against a kid, Xavier's no less, and unaware he should've.

Seeing [Xavier's son's] latest intent, Cyclops makes a decision-
-pushing himself up the rest of the way, he quickly closes the distance between himself and Xavier in time to take a crashing blow intended for the latter; much more vulnerable than Cyclops is in his combat suit.

"NHAHHHH!" Cyclops groans; falling to his hands and knees over Xavier - just barely able to keep from falling flat.

Xavier: "You FOOL, Scott Summers! To risk your life for me, when YOU have a famil-"

"That includes you." He catches his breath. "And I'll manage this,"
he rises with new purpose, a new plan, facing [Xavier's son] once more. "It's what I was taught to do."

He starts walking closer to [Xavier's son], firing a series of short blasts---missing his target with every one...

[Xavier's son] swings at him with another psionically extended arm.

Cyclops ducks, then finally aims a proper blast at his adversary's centre.

[Xavier's son] absorbs the blast as before -- but in paying attention to that and his approaching foe, [Xavier's son] neglected to pay attention to all the previous, short blasts which from point of discharge, had been bouncing off the scattered objects and now, from multiple points, collide at once!

[Xavier's son] howls as he finally takes damage -- Cyclops properly aimed blast now dealing some too while his defenses are down - Cyclops dials it up.

But [Xavier's son] isn't through just yet - a final show before he succumbs, he psionically shoots Cyclops' blast back at him -- its properties changed so Cyclops feels the impact --
CCRRrrrRRAAACcKKKK
--flung back as though hit by a car

--CCrrRAACcK as he slams into the wall.

At separate ends of the room, both now lay - defeated.

Xavier looks between them.

Scott's overcome with pain -- now in a fight to breathe.

Xavier's son is injured, extent unknown, yet he stares at his father with a strange look...expectation?
He's waiting to see what he'll do....Who will he go to?

His rage may burn anew if his father cares first, cares more, for his "other son".... and if he comes to himself instead, would it only be with that thinking? To save the other?. .
I just realized this Interest Check might work better here as it does fit into multiple sub categories (1x1, small group, casual, advanced).







Thanks for reading.
I'm open to any feedback you may have on the structure of my Interest Check, as well, as I'm not used to making such


See below for a Teaser post to give you a feel for the idea (and for me)!

NOTE: I'm typically good at mirroring the level of my partner(s), and while the teaser post doesn't show it, getting into a character's thoughts comes naturally to me. Just to say, it may not reflect Advanced RP but I'm capable and can provide an Advanced sample (different scene) on request.

Well, a few that have come to me so far:


  • Circute (from "circuit" and "cute")
  • Robow (from "robot" and "bow-wow")

Although "circuit" might give it more of an Electric vibe, so....


  • Persky (from "perky", "puppy" and/or "husky", and "Kaspersky" which is a firewall brand)
: ) Do you have the types, some characteristics / other images?
I'm pretty good with names, but better if there's some framing like that to go on.

Master Effex heard a yelp and saw more movement, though he couldn't make out the kind.
The wordless exclamation at least took the edge off - somebody lying in wait for him would've been on the lookout for him coming in, would've known, wouldn't have--"

His thoughts were interrupted when they actually spoke to him and walked out.
Their form, eyes especially, were something to captivate. But he was more taken by the fact that those eyes were focused directly on him.

He let down his apparently faulty charade. "Yeah.." He answered, debating asking the question that was foremost on his mind. But why not? It was better to know these things. "Do you have psychic powers as well?" He meant "as well as" their obvious mutation. "You shouldn't have been able to see me."

Was he tired? Did that even matter?
He'd had more run down days but that never seemed to affect his performances - they gave him a jolt of energy, in fact.

Maybe it did matter, then....maybe he was tired and as this "performance" wasn't of the entertaining variety...I should've known they were here before I came in, he thought to himself in a little reprimand. Now that he thought it, even if this person in front of him were psychic, should he have picked up on it? The other psychics he'd "known"...if he'd had any sense they were in the room, was that from his powers or theirs? Or an unseen spatial interaction of the two...If he even had known what he thought he did... Maybe he only knew them from a familiarity of recurring dreams.

Master Effex refocused his mind.
He should've felt the presence of somebody before seeing them, he decided. Mutant powers or not.
He was getting too comfortable here.

His eyes, striking in their own way for the clarity of blue, were trained on the mutant in front of him.
In a strange contrast to how Master Effex actually felt -not or as least less threatened by them than he'd felt a minute ago- his guard was up more concretely than before.
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