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Gotta call em out fast lol
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@Sagittarius: I don't think abilities are dibs. It might get boring if several (i.e. more than 3) have the same abilities, but as far as I'm aware, I don't think any are technically reserved. And if they are, they are because they belong to an already approved character.

@6slyboy6: I was planning on making a male, but I may make two, one male and one female. I might even rewrite the male as a female if I saw it as necessary.
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Bringing back Artie for the reboot. Remodeling him a bit, and expanding on his weapon descriptions.
Think of me as your friendly neighborhood evil-bad guy robot.

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Coming up with an ability is such a headache. I would love to give my character some sort of telekinesis or psionic powers, but I don't want to be unoriginal or boring. I want an interesting ability that fits the genre and isn't too OP. Ugh!
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I'll put in the sample post at a later point.

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@ravenDivinity I thought tbat too. One quick handy tip. Imagine a shit situation in life. Like if you are out if popcorn. Now you COULD go down to the store and get some, but that would be fucking tiring wouldn't it? Si why not grow it yourself using your amazing flower man abilities. Slap a 9000 after it and you havr Flowerman 9000 who can make popcorn at his/her will.

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@bluetommy2 remember that you're ability is manipulation of your bone structure not all out shapeshifting. I'd also like it if you can't change the shape of your skull (As that wouldn't be the best thing for your brain to go through). So long as you were in the military you would know how to use firearms, even in the engineering corps you would still be required to keep up to date on how to use a weapon. Perhaps a little more detail on the group that breaks him out and the mission that traumatizes him?

Also on that note you wouldn't "Retire from active service" to join the Engineering Corps. You'd request a transfer and the additional training that goes with it.

@Wonderland On an offtopic note, she's pretty darn cute. Moving onto the review. I've got nothing of note that I don't like. Accepted.

@Sagittarius I don't mind people having the same ability as everyone else. Also there are always the various elemental abilities, or someone with a physical enhancement.

@ayzrules That ability is fine, I'd even be willing for you to subtly change how people are feeling (If you want to go into scientific terms it'd probably relate to pheromones).

@vietmyke ARTEI got fat. I am going to ask, since you're here now and interested in going the route of the USF, do you want to design the military? I'm also updating the A.I tab that there is an exception to A.I running on Mars. If you agree you can just do it in GuildFormat and PM it to me. Also drop by the old stomping ground at some point.

@ravenDivinity If you have questions, feel free to ask.

@Dead Cruiser No complaints so far, I look forward to the sample.

On another note despite yesterday supposed to be my last day at work, I got called in today as someone is off sick (Go figures) so my afternoon of hashing out as much detail as possible has turned into about an hour of hashing out as much detail as possible.

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@Sep Hey boss. Decided to refine my idea before putting it up. So one idea is the one with shrinking and growing. I was thinking about thr growing taking time to be prepared whilst the shrinking having almost ni defensive abilities. The ither idea was blinking. Not in the eye way, but the warpy way. Would you be okay with that?
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@6slyboy6 as in blink teleportation? That's one of the few teleportation methods I'm alright with as it's limited by line of sight(There are others with suitible explanation/discussion that I am fine with). Fine with, so far, how you've discussed the growth/shrinking abilities.
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@Sep Ok, then I'll be thinking about these two. One note about the blink, as far as LOF goes can it pass through glass or material my character can see through? It would technically mean that he can only blink to places he can see and can fit in (eg can't blink into a mouse hole, but can blink through bars.)
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@vietmyke ARTEI got fat. I am going to ask, since you're here now and interested in going the route of the USF, do you want to design the military? I'm also updating the A.I tab that there is an exception to A.I running on Mars. If you agree you can just do it in GuildFormat and PM it to me. Also drop by the old stomping ground at some point.

R00d. And didn't we already design the military like ages ago?

I was stomping last night but you were out for the count.. D:

It's spring break so my internal sleep clock has been royally fucked.
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@vietmyke afraid that information was lost D: can bring it back tomorrow or tonight with ya.
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@SepThank for accepting my character. Do I move my CS sheet to the characters tab now? (The layout is different to when I was last here)

Can't wait to get started.
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@Wonderland Yes go ahead and move it over! Now you wait...
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I'm not done yet, and I may rework the abilities, but questions, comments, and critique are welcome.
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Now, hopefully I won't get called into work tomorrow letting me finish my own sheet xD.

@ravenDivinity will take a crack.
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(Sorry to double post Y'all)

@ravenDivinity that is a very powerful ability, it'd be good to see some setbacks on it to be considered. I quite like the hyper cognition, I have no issues with that. The weather control is the one I'm skeptical on, as it gives you control over air, water and electricity as well as temperature. That's a lot of eggs to put in one basket. I'm not against it, but it needs to be balanced out.
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@Sep: That's exactly what I wanted feedback on. I already set limits on range and targeting, I'm thinking I might nerf it further by limiting it to simple hydro/cryokinesis, minus any scalding hot water. Thoughts?
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@ravenDivinity Hydrokinesis will be fun, will also require you to carry water around with you. I will add more info to the OP if I don't get called into work but the Fresh Air Initiative is plainly that. We get air, but water is still a work in progress I'm afraid.
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