@slackpack if it's any help, should Sakana be accepted, he could be a good fit for Kirigakure.

EDIT: which if I can finish this shitty paper I need to write, I could maybe rewrite him tonight.

@Odin That's good to hear. Anyway, character ideas I'm leaning towards would be a proud mizukage-wannabe poison-user from Kirigakure or a shino-esque medical nin from Konohagakure.

If this interests anyone, I'm planning to go for a ninneko user. Basically a cat Inuzuka, though I don't really plan to have techniques who are similar to the Inuzuka ones.

@Odin@slackpack
There is one advantage in this taking place during a Shinobi World War; A Genin team could be formed across allied countries as a ad hoc group, for military needs. That may be a bit sub optimal compared to being a group purely composed from one nation, but it is possibly a valid option for those on the same side I think.

I need some sand buddies!

@Odin@slackpack
There is one advantage in this taking place during a Shinobi World War; A Genin team could be formed across allied countries as a ad hoc group, for military needs. That may be a bit sub optimal compared to being a group purely composed from one nation, but it is possibly a valid option for those on the same side I think.

Yeah, probably wise from a GM standpoint, although I reckon that'd be more something for a mission-by-mission basis because even allies didn't really trust each other from what I remember. They're shinobi after all.

@Odin Yep.

@Red Alice Yeah, seems totally legit. But maybe not for the character I'm going for. He's more of a Kirigakure purist; something like "mist village, best village." But for that medical nin, maybe.

I'll be done with my chuunin tonight, just gotta get gm input on some backstory elements!

I'll be working on mine tonight as well ^^

These are just starter reviews, since I'm going to work soon and can't touch on everything. These are the major issues.

@Odin
Uragiri Sakana
- Ura Shishō Fūin: HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA, no. I know you have a "Oh it's just a character thing, she doesn't know how to do it herself. It's just for flavor" excuse. But no. I will not change my mind on this.
- Your A Rank Jutsu: No. You're not getting any A-Rank jutsu if you're going to have 3 elements. You're trading power for versatility. You also have Great Fire Annihiliation as a B-rank jutsu. So why do you have it as A-rank and B-rank?

Sakamachi Sadako
- Too much jutsu for a fresh Genin. You'll probably be just out of the academy. So stuff like Chakra Needle with it's ability to change direction are already getting a no. Look at your sheet, pick what you feel needs to go, and drop it. Even Sasuke a prodigy only had Fireball jutsu as a new genin. Lee and Neji were already well into their genin years before they beat the shit out of Sasuke.

@Reflection fair enough, changes incoming.

Even Sasuke a prodigy only had Fireball jutsu as a new genin. Lee and Neji were already well into their genin years before they beat the shit out of Sasuke.

You'll be reinforcing that with everyone, right, my favorite furry? Also, I thought we were going with genin only? Just realized that the first char in was a chuunin. Which one has preference?

@Odin We're enforcing a "12 jutsu+Kekkei Genkai+Summons" on a fresh Genin is too much. If it's 4-5 that's not a problem. It's just the high level of the jutsu you want, combined with your 'stronk' KG are just too much for our start. Any genin who applied with that much would get the same response you just got.

And don't be passive aggressive. Throwing in emojis and jabbing at other players with snarky remarks is a bad first impression.

I thought we were going with genin only? Just realized that the first char in was a chuunin. Which one has preference?

In the Interest Check they mentioned we would be starting as Genin, but if you look in the Characters Tab, it explains how many of each rank will be allowed for each village.

Hope you are all accepting people who didn't post in the interest check. I'll throw a character together if you guys are. Saw this and a Naruto RP consider me interested if you guys are allowing people to join up.

Well this blew up rather fast :/

Unfortunately my schedule's a little too busy for me to get a CS going today, but I still wanna get my Uzumaki-Sharingan girl. If you guys remember, my plan to keep her balanced was to render her unable to naturally cast ninjutsu in any way, shape or form. She'll most likely either not realize how much chakra a jutsu actually needs and not use enough for it to be effective as a result (see Naruto's attempt at a Shadow Clone prior to him getting the Scroll of Sealing), or she'll over-invest in chakra, only for the jutsu that she's trying to cast to blow up in her face. As such, she'd have to rely on taijustu and genjutsu (and maybe not even the latter now that I think about it; we'll see)

@AdmrlStalfos19 Unfortunately, we have decided to say no to half bloods (Particularly anybody who wants to merge with the Uchiha or Uzumaki clans). Primarily due to how they tend to be front-loaded. We already said no to a few people asking about being half-uchiha or half-uzumaki, so it would be hypocritically to accept somebody who is half of both. Even if they do have a gimped start.

@AdmrlStalfos19 Unfortunately, we have decided to say no to half bloods (Particularly anybody who wants to merge with the Uchiha or Uzumaki clans). Primarily due to how they tend to be front-loaded. We already said no to a few people asking about being half-uchiha or half-uzumaki, so it would be hypocritically to accept somebody who is half of both. Even if they do have a gimped start.

...I guess that's fair.

I do have a couple more char ideas, but neither one was as concrete if I'm honest. It'll probably take some more time for me to get one out as a result.

@Raging Fenrir You're accepted though please choose from your list of jutsu 0-5 un-basics to know/be proficient in.

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@Odin
I'd appreciate if you updated your character sheets into the one's we have placed.
I do not approve of Uragiri Sakana’s age vs. rank, I also disapprove Uragiri’s military statues.

1) Uragiri is a Jounin not a special Jounin S-rank technique & missions do not apply to him
2) I disapprove of the amount of 16 Jutsu’s to the character. Especially, since Jounin tend to only lean towards specifics and mastery of one or two elements.
3) I’m not allowing custom Jutsu’s now

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Now with the decision of Sakamach Sadako. Please redirect her format to the basic one us admins laid out for you.
I disapprove of how many Chakra natures. Especially at the age Sakamach is at.
If your character is not a black receiver it is not allowed the Black Rod Release.
By experience the character wouldn’t even be able to do Truth-Seeking Release/Black Rod Release either.
Not allowing custom jutsu
For your characters age and experience they know to high of jutsu and to many.

Final evaluation on your characters:
They need to be updated to the layout we provide.
They are completely over powered for their ages. (knowing to many jutsu or too high of jutsu. Being to high ranked of a ninja for their age).
Their skills need to be rethought out.
In the canon a Jounin barely can use two nature chakras on average and they have years of experience and tend to be over the age of 25/30.
Your characters also are all over the place with techniques most don’t line up with each other meaning it would be harder for them to learn or causing their chakra to run quicker then somebody else with their basic lines of jutsu.
Neither character will be accepted at the state they are in.

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@Bounce You’re accepted! Congratulations!

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@Deadlyrose9641 Yes, it is still opened and you’re welcome to apply a character!
@BladeSS4 We are!

Did someone say they where gonna go sand ninja? Cuz I’m interested in making a puppet user