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@Renny
Alright, very cool. So, I'll mention a few things, and then you can respond with your take on that.

✣ You can remove the decimals from his length. I know it pops up when you convert imperial to metric, but we never mention decimals over here in Europe. So, '175 cm' is enough.

✣ The edited picture with frame and all was a nice effort!

✣ I recommend that you think on your character's ideology/chronicles sections and add to them over time. God knows I don't enjoy writing long character sheets up front, either, but I do encourage people to revisit their sheets as much as they can—before and during the story.

✣ Can you give this 'Dreaming Archon of the Ocean' a name? Preferably something other than Cthulhu, hah. While we're on this subject, I'd like to mix Water and Poison for this Archon rather than just water association.

✣ For the combat techniques, I'll ask for you to switch blood manipulation for something else. Maybe something from the Poison element? And for the Hyrdrokinetic choice, which is fine but a little too broad at this point, I'll ask for you to choose something from Water Attacks.

Let me know what you think about these suggestions.
@Prisk

I've been debating it over for the past couple of days about whether or not I wanted to put my name into the interest hat, but I just couldn't resist. So consider this being my official claim of interest. I've got an idea for my character too. Some things will have to be double-checked, but you can expect something within the day from me.


Good to have you, hon'. This is a good time to get in, as we're doing a hard rest and starting over.

@Prisk Can you give me and example of an attack/technique? Namely how you'd like us to describe it in our CS.


Sure. All you have to do, really, is link the ones that you like on the superpowerwiki. So, go to the Codex, scroll down to Combat, click on the elements that you want, and look under 'Applications' and 'Techniques'. There is usually an 'Attacks' section under 'Applications'. You don't have to describe anything, just link to the things you want your character to know. And don't worry about power levels, I will go through everything once you're done.
I was just about to ask for a head count, but a few more of you popped in. That's great.

Anyway, I'm currently working on the last few regions and puzzling together my characters, of which there are two. I guess the second one is a really fancy Non-Player Character, though.

@MidnightFox

Certainly. Thank you. Welcome, welcome.

@sly13

Wonderful.
@Renny@Spiritzer

Thank you, thank you. And welcome, welcome. There's a lot to read as well, so going slow in the beginning here is useful.

So, let's see how many players we get until the end of the coming weekend. A small and reliable cast is preferable, but I won't shut anyone out if we get many players.
Link to OOC


N a m e S u r n a m e
Age — gender — Height cm


p r e s e n c e
Describe how your character is generally perceived by others—short and long term. The short term applies to strangers and first impressions. The long term applies to acquaintances and friends. A description of physical features and clothing can also be included in this section (optional if using pictures).


i d e o l o g y
Describe your character's world view, ideas, principles, dogmas, opinions, and philosophies, or any combination of these. This is not your character's personality. Their personality is shown in the game through dialog and actions. Any indication of 'personality' is better suited for the Presence section above.


c h r o n i c l e
Describe the origin of your character and whatever events that are noteworthy. These can be before and after Calamity. About eight months has passed since Calamity.


s t r i f e
Describe your character's experiences with violent confrontations and combat. If your character has none, that can also be mentioned. However, your character's discovery of magical abilities should be described here. Click on the elements in the combat section of the codex, and look at the various attacks and techniques associated with them. Choose the ones your character has learned by themselves, and list them below (link to the wiki).

Attack/Technique #1
Attack/Technique #2
Attack/Technique #3
Attack/Technique #4
Attack/Technique #5
Attack/Technique #6


a u x i l i a r y
Optional. This is a space for information that does not fit elsewhere. You can mention trivia about your character or maybe special, useful skills such as cooking, fishing, driving, hacking, lock picking—whatever it might be.
c h a r a c t e r c r e a t i o n
There will not be many restrictions here. Your character became a Guardian at some point after spirit migration. Whether he or she has been a civilian or with the U.D.F. after that is up to you. The character sheet does not have to be extensive. The sections are rather vague on purpose. It is also possible to have more than one character, if you so desire.

You can work with your character by considering the lore of the world, the regions, culture, and other such things. You can also consider the major events happening, which is the war and the presence of the cult. If you have other ideas and concepts, we are all ears.

You can get the special font for the quick info here. If you use a picture of your character, and please do, then use a realistic one. If you can't find any, then we will help you find one that you like. You can also add gifs and such wherever you want, if you are into that sort of thing.

To get the code for the character sheet, click the 'view raw' button at the top right corner of the post containing the character sheet.

Post your completed character, publicly or privately, for approval. When approved, post it here.
@Spiritzer@sly13@Raider Dog@Renny@HowlsOfWinter

Still doing some work on things, but it's coming along. @Rockette is doing some writing for us on the regions, which will be nice.


He just came from nowhere.
A great warmth rushed through my body as he touched my wounds.
I have no other way to describe it other than...a miracle.

When he came, he showed me the light.
I have never broken down in tears in my entire life.
His soul was with me, mine with his.

We were so wrong.
The world must be cleansed by the light.
All of this happened for a reason,
for us to come home.

He keeps us safe.
When we fight we are immortal in his presence.
How can you not see that his word is the way?
He believes in you.












Alright, excellent. I'll put the OOC up soon. Between this interest and the one or two lurkers, there's enough, as we're not looking for all that many players. There is still some things that have I have write, but I can complete the non-essentials after the OOC. I'll tag everyone in the OOC thread and bump this with the link.
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