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@Salsa Verde
Very interesting reading! Seeing as your character has such expertise with fungi, some of those 'evil' corporations mentioned in my "Enemy" section would likely be interested in acquiring your character for several reasons. This gives me some interesting things to do in the story, for sure.

Okay, then, comments:
This is a fictional world, which I still don't mention in a clear way. So, the People’s Republic of Korea has to be renamed to something of your choosing. After that, look at the 'world map' in the IC-tab and decide where this country is, and I'll add it. All the details mentioned so far about the country can stay as it is.

The comet did not actually hit the world itself, but took an orbit around it. But, debris from it bombard the world every day, so what happened to your character still holds up. Just rephrase the sentence to fit the lore.

Keep the timeline in mind. The comet arrived ten years ago, when your character was 18.
@FollowthePath@Archangel89@Krash@Martian@DeadDrop
To the guys that have character sheets ready in the tab: the 'prelude' is available in the IC-tab. You do what you want with it, but it's there for you to start posting while we wait for others. If you want to simply wait, then that's fine too.

@Siber@RezonanceV
Post your character sheets in the character tab whenever you guys are ready with your edits. I realize that I didn't quite make this clear before that you're all good to go.


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EMILIA "GARUDA" LANGE FARHAVEN 06:00AM @Prisk
Emilia kept staring at the last message from him. Several hours had passed just fidgeting with her phone, waiting for a sign. Alas, complete silence reigned within the nearly dead circuits of the failing battery. When the brightness of the screen casting its light on her face finally gave in, she tossed the device over the edge of the rooftop. Wherever she would go in the world, the comfort of height was ever present at a slight and easy jump. In this place, Emilia could find a moment to herself and reflect on things past and to come. Somehow, he had managed to still be a craved and at the same time nauseating aspect of her life. However, this, this damned message, was so out of touch. She could not understand it, she could not understand him. The only thing she could understand was that whoever he had been to her was no more.

Was he the reason why she was here? The sleepy town of Farhaven was a humble sight just east of the much more impressive city skyline of Embergate. Before she let go of her phone for the last time, Emilia had accepted an invite—or an order, depending on who you ask—to join the third iteration of the Special Warfare and Reconnaissance Group. It was a special task force consisting of only Aeons, or, well, Guardians of the UDF. The prestige that came with it was one thing, but Emilia was more focused on the pay, which would definitely be an enormous help to her parents back home. She had seen some of the names that were lined up for the Group, and it certainly had some heavy hitters on it. Whatever the mission was, she hoped that distraction and confusion would not overwhelm her. This message was the last that Emilia would ever have to see from him, of that she was determined.

Emilia gathered her things, shouldered her rifle, and slipped off of the edge of the building. She landed on the street below with a thud that resonated nearby windows. The mission briefing for the new Group was going to be held at the UDF: Cetra East Command, south west of Farhaven. However, the meeting was not until the next day, so she had plenty of time on her hands and the Command Center was only four hours away by train. Emilia had spent the past two weeks at the far eastern front of Cetra, the east continent. It had been a cold and wet ordeal, far from something she would ever want to go back to, but the pay was good. The far eastern front is where the comet usually drops its first bombardment for the day. As it is now, the comet completes an orbit around the world twice a day, reaching the far eastern front early in the morning and about twelve hours later in the evening.

The streets of Farhaven at this time in the morning was like any other town. People were on their way to work, children on their way to school, and then there was all kinds of military presence. Emilia silently emerged from an alley. This day had decided to be cloudy with a light drizzle to set the mood, so she could hide underneath a comfortable hoodie without drawing attention. Her UDF issued cargo pants and boots would give her away as service personnel, but at least random soldiers would not instantly recognize her. It was a strange life, long standing duty to the UDF, yet walking on a thin line between famous and infamous. Emilia followed the flow of the sparse crowds, making her way towards the train station. It was near the end of the month, closing in on summer time, so a good chunk of Emilia's salary had already been transferred to her parents. All she had left now was just enough for a train ticket and breakfast.

There was a UDF checkpoint outside the main entrance to the train station. It was quite unavoidable to identify yourself before using any public transportation. As one would expect, the soldier who looked at Emilia's identification recognized her right away. "Oh, cool, Garuda—you go right on ahead," the soldier said and seemed moderately excited. "Thank you," Emilia smirked. Luckily, the man was a lot more reserved in his reaction than most. One could never tell how someone would react when meeting a known Aeon in person, truly a mixed bag of emotions both favorable and hostile. Some people absolutely despised everything about Aeons, spirits, and all the metaphysical stuff. They just wanted a normal, quiet life without the looming threat of being killed by some unstable, demigod maniac.

The train station had an expansive interior hall. A couple of vending machines were lined up along some of the walls, along with several rows of benches for waiting travelers. Emilia approached one of the four ticket booths and asked for a single adult, UDF command. The old lady behind the thick glass separating herself from the outside world did not seem to recognize Emilia at all. The ticket set Emilia back by a hundred and twenty Credits, which left her with about fifty for breakfast—she sighed and thought of the message from him again. Why was it living rent free in her head? Why was he living there at all? Emilia had not seen or heard from him in years, and then all of a sudden that message came out of the blue and completely without context. There was nothing before it, nothing after it. Emilia had a seat on one of the benches, waiting for the 07:30 train to arrive. But, the message kept looping back and around—again, again, again, and again. What did he mean by it?

There's something I've got to do, Mia.
Something I couldn't do while you and mom were around.


Get out of my head, idiot...


Quest Steps
You can meet/recognize Emilia at the train station and interact. Another option is to do this on the train, if your character also is in Farhaven. You could also be on your way to UDF: Cetra East Command from somewhere else on the local map. Other than this, there is not much direction seeing as this is a Prelude that allows people to start posting while waiting for others. The story will begin proper with Chapter 1.







You can use Flashbacks to interact in the past. Simply mark a different timeline in your post with the place and time/date, just as present posts in the main story. This allows you to complete old scenes after moving on and create engaging history between characters.

Refrain from posting music or images beside your character image. I will provide 'set pieces' and 'soundtrack', which you can simply ignore if you want to.

Early Morning (06:00-09:00 AM)
Late Morning (09:00-12:00 AM)
After Noon (12:00-15:00 PM)
Late Day (15:00-18:00 PM)
Early Evening (18:00-21:00 PM)
Late Evening (21:00-00:00 PM)
Night (00:00-03:00 AM)
Late Night (03:00-06:00 AM)







@metanoia
Hey! Sure. Wait a second, something looks similar between you and @Archangel89.
@Aeolian
Great concept—sort of 'mad' scientist, yes? There are two things, though, that I can comment on.

First, the timeline is a bit wonky. The comet arrived ten years ago, when your character was 34. Your chronicle reads much differently at this time. Am I right in this? Otherwise, I completely misunderstood everything.

Second, the spirits and 'mind' magic. I think it was during the first iteration of The Spirits Within, years ago, that I and those players deliberated on what spirits could and couldn't do. All sorts of 'mind' magic was excluded. Spirits express themselves purely in an elemental fashion. So, reading minds is something that we'll have to cut out and replace, completely, unfortunately.

There isn't as much focus on character powers/abilities in this as it is in typical Marvel/DC stuff, I think. By 'focus' I mean 'uniqueness'. In this, it's more how you attack instead of what you are attacking with. So, any uniqueness has to come from the 'techniques' a character uses to express spirit/elemental magic. I listed some common techniques, but they're by no means the only ones. I gave my own character a technique that isn't listed, and that's fine. I encourage everyone to keep this in mind.
I assumed it was heavily based on Kit Harrington


Man, why does Game of Thrones feel like it concluded 10 years ago? I think that's the guy I had in mind but couldn't name.

@Aeolian
Hey! Well, look at that. All the old greats of the past showing up out of the blue. I love that.
@nodogs
Hah, there he is! You're very welcome, as well, of course—now or whenever your muse puts that idea on paper.

@DeadDrop
That's okay. We'll keep it as it is, but do continue to look for something. I'll look for something myself. I'm pretty sure that guy in the concept art is based on an actor, as I recognize that face.

Here's the edited image: i.imgur.com/8qK7UdP.png
Put it all up in the character tab.
I'm thinking I'll start with a 'prelude' for the story, of sorts, so that people can start posting without making progress in the 'main story' while we wait for all players to complete their characters. When everyone is ready, we'll start 'chapter 1' or something like that to mark the beginning of the main story.

@Krash
I'm guessing it's this one, also based on your character's chronicle.


@Rockette
Oh yes, baby. More than welcome.

@Salsa Verde
As long as nodogs doesn't think I'm trying to snatch players from his game or something, we're all good. Always room here, welcome. Even if it seems crowded, you know how it is—life will happen for some, eventually.






All characters must be approved before posting here.

Player Count: 9-ish.







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