Gwah, so many new CS'es to look at. Damnit people, why can't you take your time and fiddle around with them some more or something...
Anyway, time to move onto opinions:
@CyraniaI'm sorry I missed your sheet from earlier.
But the elven adventuress seems charming and fun to me. There're no problems with her sheet either. :)
@Rune_alchemistFrightened Farmer Female seems fine and all. Just be aware that, as she doesn't have any Magic Element-training (in her skills), her "spell" won't actually... Y'know...
Do anything. Other than that, she seems perfectly fine.
@CrowvetteThe only issue I have with Varisse are her spells and their properties. This isn't any fault of yours though, but rather an issue of me not explaiing to everyone (yet) how magic works.
Generally sopeking, whether it is a spell learned from a tome or a spell from a staff/wand, a spell can only do
ONE thing. There are no "manipulation" or "amorphous" spells that can be used for both offensive, defensive and utilitarian purposes. If you have a spell that creates a small area of darkness, then it will just create a small area of darkness - it cannot turn things invisible or effect the surroundings. Likewise, if you use a spell that creates a firebolt, you cannot turn it inot mutliple projectieles or use it as a torch. Well, I guess you could hurl it down a hallway and follow the light with your eyes, but it'd go out as soon as it hit a solid object.
Other than this, she herself is fine in terms of everything else.
@RemramChef McDwarf is fine. However, please do list what material his weapon is made from - as most everyone else has.
Other than that, he seems... Quirky...
@Sho MinazukiMr. Breaking-the-Law is alright in terms of his persona, history and skills. but, as with our dwarf up there, do list what material the Throwing Knives are made out of, as they're a weapon.
Also, as he doesn't have the "Fire Magic" skill, I'm afraid your outlaw isn't capable of casting that spell of his. Unless you're willing to sacrifice one of his other skills and replace it.
@ExpendableMinstel looks alright, except for the same issue as our fugitive above. His weapons need to be specified what material they're made from (for the dagger) or what quality it is (for the sling).
And again, without any skill in a Magic Eelement, I'm afraid his Darkvision-spell isn't going to work. Also, Adept level and Journeyman level are the same level of expertise.
- Novice
- Apprentice
- Adept
- Expert
- Master
Phew, I think that's all of you.
@Mistress Dizzy hasn't finished her Island Dwrf yet, so I'll hold off on commenting on them for now.
I should go on to explain some things about how spells should be listed.
A spell start with it's name, then it's element and then it's level.
So, for example:
Wind Cutter, Air (Adept)
The first part is the name. The second is what element it uses, and lastly is the level of knowledge in spellcraft needed to actually cast it. I made it this way so that I could easily look at peoples' spell-lists and see what element their spells are, without having to read the description every time. I'd really like everyone to try and follow this uniform pattern if they intend to use magic.
Likewise, weapons and armor should
always be specified what material they're made out of, or what quality they are (ifthey're a ranged projectile weapon like a bow or sling or crossbow). For example:
- Copper Breastplate
- Iron Longsword
- Simple Shortbow
Or
- Hide Gauntlets
- Mithril Spear
- Fine Heavy Crossbow
Obviouslt, you lot don't get tos tart with fancy mithril or high-quality items, becuase part of this RP is gathering or finding stuff and making yourself STRONKER. But it also serves to show at what "titem tier" you're at, and if something you find or want to buy will actually be an improvement or not when you find it.
If you just specify that you've got a "battle axe", then how can you tell if the "iron battle axe" you found in a dungeon's treasure chest is better or worse than what you already got? After all, you don't even know what your old one is made out of! Wood? Clay? PLASTIC!?
And now for the issue brought up by
@ERode. We got a bunch more of you here than I'm capable of taking on and along for this journey. However, since not everyone has finished their CS'es yet, and the OOC isn't up, I'm not going to start trimming down the cast just yet. Because there's no need for me to do so when things aren't ready and properly set up yet.
So, to those of you who've yet to make a CS or are worrking on one. Don't worry, you still have time. Once the OOC goes up and you all inevitably post your CS'es there for a
proper review and analysis,
then I'll start the process of cherry-picking.
But, until then, enoy each other's cmpany. Form pacts. Gossip. Make bets on who'll get in or who won't. Iunno. I still got an OOC to write up.
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