Height: 5'6" / 167 cm Eye Color: Brown Hair Color: Black
Name: Da'Niyah Age: 24 Nationality: African American Occupation: High School Swim and Cheer coach Gender: Female
Personality: Da'Niyah was a observant individual, preferring to first try to analyze a situation before reacting on a first glance. However, this does not mean her emotions cannot affect her usually calm personality as under the right circumstances she can be stubborn, easily angered and down right narcinicitic. Yet, such a thing happens only once in three blue moons, so nothing to worry about. She is very collected and has a rather cozy presence, if she's not adjusted to you yet, she might not speak much at all, leading people to think she is quite stoic.
Her costume makes her feel like a people are always staring at her even when she's alone, this by itself makes her paranoid and easily anxious leading to ill temper.
Background: Da'Niyah was born and raised in Detroit, MI, she went out of state for college cheered, swam and ran track there then came back to be a coach at her old high school. She majored in Biochemistry, and worked part time at a Research Facility before becoming a coach, now it's more of a side hustle.
Powers/Abilities/Spells: - Auto-Cleaning: Costume washes itself daily, you never need to worry about stains or smells
- Auto-Repair: Costume restores and repairs itself
Pajama Party:
- Stat Boost (Minor): Da'Niyah's costume grants her sllightly improved physical reflexes, agility and hand-eye-coordination. It also bestows a very minor improvement to her physical strength.
- Protective Garb: At this stage, Da'Niyah's costume offers as much protection as a full set of leather armor.
- Pink Roses & Burgundy Thorns This skill allows Da'Niyah to obscure the opponent's vision with a shower of pink roses obtained from her bouquet. Thorns from the stems could then be used to do minor physical damage to opponents.
2. There are a lot of things missing. Including nationality, occupation and imagery.
3. You don't age down or change appearance when you get isekai'd in this story. You retain the same look as you had when on Earth. So there's no way Xian could have been a 20-something and then end up as a teenager after transfering. Even if his costume is based on the avatar from whatever game he was playing, he would still look like his regular, real-world self, just in that costume.
4. He seems to be happy or enthused about his costume. This is a direct contradiction to the setting, because the point of the costumes is to make the characters feel embarrssed, silly and socially awkward, meaning they'd prefer not to have to wear their outfits.
5. Please make sure you read the Rules.
6. English isn't my first language, and I often make spelling mistakes or grammatical errors. However, your sentences and writing is unfortunately very awkward to read. In an RP, where communication and making yourself understood is one of the most important things, I'm not sure how well you'd do. PLease don't take this is as me insulting your language skills - I personally just have a very big problem understanding people when they don't structure or speak any language (including my native one) in a way that's close to proper. I thus have a very hard time communicating in the real world with foreigners who speak in a 'broken' way - this isn't their fault, of course, I understand that speaking a language that isn't your native can be very difficult, and it's more me not being able to properly piece together what they mean, want or are saying. Wow, this turned into a long section.
Hah, so we finally got an actual adult for the group. Good, good, the high schoolers could use a teacher-like person to keep 'em in line. ;P
There're no issues with Da'Niyah's CS, but I will have to ask you to go read the Rules before I can accept her. Oh, and don't forget to describe your pajamas. :)
Charlotte looks perfectly fine and acceptable! ............. If not for th fact that you forgot to include her height, eye and hair color... But once those are added, she'll be a welcome addition to the cast. ^^
Important Notice to All:
At this point, with so few vacant slots still available, I'm afraid there will need to be a queue added from here on. I want to give the people who posted and participated in the original interest Check a chance to finish their sheets and have a spot in the cast. Due to this, I may need to add one or two extra cast-slots to accomodate this, but beyond that there will be no new people added to the active group.
For this reason, if you're a player who didn't post or interact in the Interest Check, you may still apply, but if you're accepted you'll be placed on a Waiting List, and I'll contact you if any of the active players leave or drop out.
I'm doing this becuase, as you can see in the tags, this is supposd to be a Small Group-RP, and we've already hit the limit of available player slots.
I uh... Uhm... What? I'm sorry, I'm having a little trouble understanding what you said there.
If you're asking if that picture is acceptable as a costume, I suppose it is? I'm honestly having a hard time telling exactly what it's supposed to be, though I'm assunming it's some kind of minotaur or otherwise similar person? It's very... Chibi... So it's hard to get a proper feel for the design. Some kind of cyber-cow?
If that wasn't what you wwre asking, I'm terribly sorry for misunderstanding. :(
Height: 5'6" / 167 cm Eye Color: Blue Hair Color: Chestnut Brown
Name: Aria Everhart Age: 16 Nationality: United States Occupation: High School Student Gender: Female
Personality: Aria is a curious and determined individual, driven by her insatiable thirst for knowledge and discovery. Her analytical mind is balanced by a kind and empathetic nature. She values logic and reason but also recognizes the importance of compassion. Aria is also patient and methodical, often approaching problems with a calm demeanor. Her love for stargazing and astronomy has instilled in her a sense of wonder and awe for the universe. While she can be reserved at times, she's quick to open up to those who share her interests and passions.
Her costume makes her feel ridiculous and she can't shake the feeling that she's playing a part in some bizarre theatrical performance.
Background: Aria is a high school student known for her curiosity and dedication. Growing up near a university observatory, she spent countless nights stargazing with her father. Her passion for astronomy led her to excel in school, and she often impressed her teachers and peers with her knowledge. Despite her academic prowess, Aria faced the same challenges as any other high school student—balancing homework, extracurricular activities, and friendships.
One evening, while studying for her final exams, Aria noticed a strange phenomenon in the sky. She couldn't tear her eyes away from the celestial display, and as the voice beckoned her, she found herself transported to a fantastical world.
- Auto-Repair: The costume repairs itself daily, ensuring it remains intact during battles.
- Pajama Party: Consists of a soft, silky white nightgown with a V-neckline and short, fluttery sleeves. The same blue bow from her original costume is still tied around her waist. The gown also falls to her ankles, and the fabric is adorned with silver star patterns.
- Stat Boost (Minor): Aria's costume grants her some slight magic resistance and makes her own magic spells slightly more potent. She also gains a very minor increase to her magic regeneration, along with a minute boost to her original physical strength.
- Warding Garb: At this stage, Aria's costume grants her a slightly boosted resistance to all hostile spells, and provides about as much protection as a leather cuirass.
- Moonbeam Barrage Aria gathers moonlight into her hands, shaping it into shimmering spheres. She launches these spheres at her enemies, inflicting minor magical damage and possibly causing a temporary daze or confusion effect.
Oh, I forgot! This isn't actually a point you need to edit so much as I need to clarify it.
The Imagery-part is meant to merely tell the reader what your character's costume focuses on thematically. In your case, it'd be something like "stars & space" or "astrology" or "magic girl & the moon/stars".
Basically, your Imagery is meant to just be your general theme. That way, I know what extra/additional skills or abilities to give your costume as your character grows, keeping them in line with your overall idea/concept. :)
Once you've done that, I'll be happy to approve of Aria.
Ah, the classic magical girl. I was wondering if we'd get any of these. :)
Sadly, there are a few issues with your current character sheet, and I'll break the points down to make it easy to address:
1. Your CS isn't using the full, provided CS template, as your character's name isn't listed above her age.
2. Your character seems to actually like or enjoy her costume, which is a direct contradiction to the setting of the RP. As characters are meant to either find their outfits embarrassing, awkward or would just prefer not to have to parade around in it. You don't have to despise or hate your costume, but it shouldn't be something you're "excited" about either.
3. You have too many powers in your ability-list. You'd need to decide between Celestial Affinity, Celestial Resonance or Moonbeam Barrage. They're all fine, but at the very start of the RP you may only pick one custom skill/power/passive, so you'd need to choose one of them, you can't get 'em all.
Other than those points, there are no issues with your character. Let me know if you edit your current post so I can look it over again, or re-post your character sheet once you've updated it.
EDIT:
Oh, I forgot! This isn't actually a point you need to edit so much as I need to clarify it.
The Imagery-part is meant to merely tell the reader what your character's costume focuses on thematically. In your case, it'd be something like "stars & space" or "astrology" or "magic girl & the moon/stars".
Height: 4'11" / 150 cm Eye Color: Red Hair Color: Black
Name: Sayu Takayomi Age: 18 Nationality: Japan Occupation: High School Student Gender: Female
Personality:
"What? What is this ridiculous outfit? This… this short skirt… these wolf ears… this is completely embarrassing! I haven't worn a skirt since I was in elementary school and now I have to run around in a stupid, cutesy, cosplay costume! Not to mention those ears… they twitch on their own, can you believe it? And to think I'm stuck wearing it if I want to survive in this world… Garghhh, it's so infuriating!"
In short, she's a tomboy who "hates" cutesy things.
Other than that, she's a direct and honest person to the point of being somewhat of an asshole at times. She hates liars and schemers. She also hates being teased for her young and petite appearance.
Background:
She grew up just like any ordinary high school girl, with only the caveat being that her parents were mostly absent, leaving her to live on her own in her apartment. Something she was perfectly fine with, as she enjoyed the freedom she had.
She was sleeping in class when she was teleported into this newfound world. She hated school and she was pretty much a delinquent with bad grades. She never bullied anyone though. In fact, she hated bullies. She slapped a girl for bullying another once so hard she made her cry.
Costume Overview:
Type: Warrior Source: Little Red Riding Hood Imagery: Fairy Tale
Powers/Abilities/Spells:
- Auto-Cleaning: Your costume somehow washes itself daily, meaning you never need to worry about stains or bad smell!
- Auto-Repair: Should your costume ever become torn or damaged, don't worry! It somehow restores and repairs itself daily, meaning maintenance is a non-issue! ... Unless you're in a still on-going fight.
- Pajama Party: A simple translucent white negligee that reaches down to her upper thighs.
- Stat Boost (Minor): Sayu's costume grants her a very slight improvement to her physical strength and endurance. It also helps her recover her stamina slightly faster than normal.
- Defensive Garment: At this stage, Sayu's costume offers as much protection as a full suit of chainmail.
- Rampaging Wolf. Using claws jutting out from her knuckles, she would tear the enemy to shreds.
[list][*]I don't use social media, discord or google docs.
[*]I suffer from Retinitis Pigmentosa and use a text-reading software to get through other peoples' posts.
[*]I'm rude, short-tempered and unserious. I'll likely say things that'll upset, offend and/or infuriate you.
[*]I consider roleplaying a hobby and a pass-time, not art.
[*]I do anime-roleplay and [b]only[/b] anime-roleplay.[/list]
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